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C&C on my new sig.

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So, is it enough?

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I am immediately drawn to the light and not his face...beyond that I don't have enuf skillz to critique you :P
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Your right the lighting is a little to big.
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i :love: pulp fiction, so good sig :D
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I dunno it's just missing something :?
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I like it, although I wish it had some more contrast in order to bring out the focal point. I'm not too great with crits on these types of sigs but I do definitely think you should make the yellowish lighting a bit less intense and maybe darken the area around the person in order to make him stand out more.

Just my opinion. I love how you made the words "Ol3n" go underneath the guy. That's a great effect. :)
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0l3n wrote:Image

So, is it enough?


Overdid the lighting, though I like the colour theme you were going for.
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+1 on the ligthng comments and a 8/10 for the sexy stuff on the right.
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Thanks guys, ill see what I can do.

School starts in a few hours so ill have to hurry :D
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Lighting has already been addressed, overall great composition, but I think that Pulp Fiction and glowy purty efffects arent super compatible. <-- that is a completely subjective comment too, so take it at face value. ;) gj kiu!
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I was wondering what this meant kiu = ???
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reK wrote:I was wondering what this meant kiu = ???


keep it up!
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oooohhhhhhh ok
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First time hearing that Rizz :D

But thanks...

I dont even know if ive seen Pulp Fiction :oops:
so I wouldnt know.
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So ive posted up a v.2.0 and 3.0, the second version has smaller lighting and the third is b&w.
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Number 2 is a big improvement on the original.

I like it a lot, the whole sig in general actually.
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Nice to know its better now.
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0l3n wrote:Nice to know its better now.


B/W is 5x better imo. It cancels the warm feeling given by the color.

Pulp Fiction is a very gritty movie, it doesnt beat around the bush - a guy gets his head blown off accidentally in the backseat of a car and the driver/passenger are more pissed about the car than the guy. One guy gets raped in the basement of a hillbillies pawnshop, where a sword killing also ends up taking place, etc. So the warm lights and soft feeling made me feel like...wtf?
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I really didnt know that and now I lol :P
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v 1 is the best for sure, the color gives it a perfect focal point, other wise my eyes wander,

the v1 and maybe v2 (i like 1 a bit better)
is so nice, i look at it and it catches my eye as a scroll through teh page and is just all nice overall, great sig, get rid of v3 :P put it in ur current
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plss tell me thats not a pic of you.... cuz if it is i'm gonna call you gay till you go give zypher a hug.
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8/10

That soft brushing on the lower sig is a bit distracting.
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brentonsbbe359 wrote:plss tell me thats not a pic of you.... cuz if it is i'm gonna call you gay till you go give zypher a hug.


Lol thats Samuel L Jackson!
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