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0l3n
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by 0l3n » Mon Aug 20, 2007 7:49 pm
So, is it enough?
2.0
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by lavapockets » Mon Aug 20, 2007 8:09 pm
I am immediately drawn to the light and not his face...beyond that I don't have enuf skillz to critique you
0l3n
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by 0l3n » Mon Aug 20, 2007 11:26 pm
Your right the lighting is a little to big.
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by Luoma » Mon Aug 20, 2007 11:43 pm
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pulp fiction, so good sig
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by Bones » Tue Aug 21, 2007 12:43 am
I dunno it's just missing something
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by Diabolic » Tue Aug 21, 2007 1:12 am
I like it, although I wish it had some more contrast in order to bring out the focal point. I'm not too great with crits on these types of sigs but I do definitely think you should make the yellowish lighting a bit less intense and maybe darken the area around the person in order to make him stand out more.
Just my opinion. I love how you made the words "Ol3n" go underneath the guy. That's a great effect.
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by iBilly » Tue Aug 21, 2007 3:46 am
0l3n wrote: So, is it enough?
Overdid the lighting, though I like the colour theme you were going for.
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by rek » Tue Aug 21, 2007 6:41 am
+1 on the ligthng comments and a 8/10 for the sexy stuff on the right.
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by 0l3n » Tue Aug 21, 2007 6:48 am
Thanks guys, ill see what I can do.
School starts in a few hours so ill have to hurry
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by Rizla » Tue Aug 21, 2007 10:28 am
Lighting has already been addressed, overall great composition, but I think that Pulp Fiction and glowy purty efffects arent super compatible. <-- that is a completely subjective comment too, so take it at face value.
gj kiu!
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by rek » Tue Aug 21, 2007 10:32 am
I was wondering what this meant kiu = ???
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by Rizla » Tue Aug 21, 2007 10:41 am
reK wrote: I was wondering what this meant kiu = ???
keep it up!
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by rek » Tue Aug 21, 2007 10:48 am
oooohhhhhhh ok
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by 0l3n » Tue Aug 21, 2007 11:45 am
First time hearing that Rizz
But thanks...
I dont even know if ive seen Pulp Fiction
so I wouldnt know.
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by 0l3n » Tue Aug 21, 2007 12:30 pm
So ive posted up a v.2.0 and 3.0, the second version has smaller lighting and the third is b&w.
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by iBilly » Tue Aug 21, 2007 2:24 pm
Number 2 is a big improvement on the original.
I like it a lot, the whole sig in general actually.
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0l3n
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by 0l3n » Tue Aug 21, 2007 10:31 pm
Nice to know its better now.
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by Rizla » Tue Aug 21, 2007 10:38 pm
0l3n wrote: Nice to know its better now.
B/W is 5x better imo. It cancels the warm feeling given by the color.
Pulp Fiction is a very gritty movie, it doesnt beat around the bush - a guy gets his head blown off accidentally in the backseat of a car and the driver/passenger are more pissed about the car than the guy. One guy gets raped in the basement of a hillbillies pawnshop, where a sword killing also ends up taking place, etc. So the warm lights and soft feeling made me feel like...wtf?
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by 0l3n » Tue Aug 21, 2007 10:39 pm
I really didnt know that and now I lol
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by aazumak » Wed Aug 22, 2007 2:05 am
v 1 is the best for sure, the color gives it a perfect focal point, other wise my eyes wander,
the v1 and maybe v2 (i like 1 a bit better)
is so nice, i look at it and it catches my eye as a scroll through teh page and is just all nice overall, great sig, get rid of v3
put it in ur current
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by brentonsbbe359 » Wed Aug 22, 2007 3:48 am
plss tell me thats not a pic of you.... cuz if it is i'm gonna call you gay till you go give zypher a hug.
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by CrimsonNuker » Wed Aug 22, 2007 4:30 am
8/10
That soft brushing on the lower sig is a bit distracting.
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by 0l3n » Wed Aug 22, 2007 5:58 am
brentonsbbe359 wrote: plss tell me thats not a pic of you.... cuz if it is i'm gonna call you gay till you go give zypher a hug.
Lol thats Samuel L Jackson!
Im white...