comments i guess

SoF_boy · Post by **SoF_boy** » Wed Aug 01, 2007 4:38 am

Dont usually do sigs but i decided to give it a try more into making web templates but I gave it a shot without a tutorial after my i did two or so of them just wondering how I did

Rizla · Post by **Rizla** » Wed Aug 01, 2007 6:50 am

text+edge=no.

bluey · Post by **bluey** » Wed Aug 01, 2007 7:00 am

Rizla wrote:text+edge=no.

I have to agree, the text location isnt the best -

a few other things:
1. The text is hard to read because its black, and the sig is dark.
2. The subject at the right could be lightened up a bit, maybe
add some shading effects (but it really depends on your style).
3. I suggest a border, there are a lot of things you can do to make
one but it just adds a really nice touch, and finishes off a piece.

Other than that, its great! Keep going ^_^

SoF_boy · Post by **SoF_boy** » Wed Aug 01, 2007 7:32 am

well i made some of the improvements but im tired so this is what i got now

Rizla · Post by **Rizla** » Wed Aug 01, 2007 7:46 am

ditch the dropshadow on your focal point, clean up the edges on your focal, create some variances in shading as bluey said, lighten up a bit on the scanlines, bring your text together instead of seperated.