My first gift sig: Exality :)

SuicideGrl · Post by **SuicideGrl** » Mon Jun 11, 2007 12:52 am

Hope you like it :)

c/c plx....

BrokenSaint · Post by **BrokenSaint** » Mon Jun 11, 2007 12:57 am

Nice. IMO, the background seems dull. Besides that it's cool. I'd give it a 7.5/10

Stompy · Post by **Stompy** » Mon Jun 11, 2007 1:20 am

Nice for a first sig. Very nice. The background really doesnt go to well with the rest. Bu tnice for a first. keep it up

Rizla · Post by **Rizla** » Mon Jun 11, 2007 1:34 am

O think you could easily gain a more symbiotic feel by grabbing the shapes in the background and make a clipping mask off the car. I think the text should be as bright and vivid as the car, the car looks good, I like how it reacts with the border from the headlights, but the motion blur/smudge in the back shouldnt affect the border imo -- that makes it seem like the whole car is above your border.

6.5/10

exality · Post by **exality** » Mon Jun 11, 2007 2:26 am

ok so here it is ...i LOVE it but i do think that the border shouldnt be affected^^stated above^^ and is the white triangle in the windshield sposed to be there???

rek · Post by **rek** » Mon Jun 11, 2007 2:35 am

The car is great with how u makeit look like its moving but like other people said the background is a little plain, mayb add some colour to it and fix some lighting

SuicideGrl · Post by **SuicideGrl** » Mon Jun 11, 2007 4:12 am

stock:

the white triangle is in the stock, i'll see what i can do to tone it down. also, border issue fixed. added some color to bg.

old:

new

exality · Post by **exality** » Mon Jun 11, 2007 4:15 am

thx soo much I LOVE IT!!!!

Rizla · Post by **Rizla** » Mon Jun 11, 2007 5:33 am

7.5/10 on your revision, gj!

Skitsefrenik · Post by **Skitsefrenik** » Mon Jun 11, 2007 5:39 am

SuicideGrl · Post by **SuicideGrl** » Mon Jun 11, 2007 3:21 pm

you mean shift the car right and rotate it to follow the road you outlined? lol i actually moved the car more left because i didn't want it to be so centered. just a different perspective i guess. thanks for the comments guys :)