NSR ^ Fashion

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NSR ^ Fashion

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Bad name for it i know... But couldnt find a name that fits more..
IF you have suggestion, let me know ;)


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lacking contrast and depth. Really monotone. I can't really see any effects or anything you've done to the tag. The white brush light source by her face is really harsh, and it's unnatural. Move the light source to the top so it's hitting the other side of her face. Text is
too far away from the focal. Sorry, don't have much positive feedback for this one.
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The way how evrything is dark cept a spot net to her face doesnt look right. And your text should not stay the same for evry sig. 6/10
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Post by cin »

your last 2 sigs are like 10x better than the ones before.

keep up the good work. its not perfect yet, but you're well on your way.

i agree with holla, its lacking depth. only way to explain that plus the
"lightsource" next to her face would be, she's behind glass. but i don't
think that was your original interpretation of the piece :]

and i agree with .rek
get some different text styles to play around with ;]

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