[NSR] My first sig. ( Be gentle)

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[NSR] My first sig. ( Be gentle)

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Here it is my first sig.
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Really nice, kinda looks a little too sharpned, and the text dosent flow too good either.
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its really good for your first sig =) but says like christina, it looks to sharpened. and try to keep the text away from the corners. try to have it near the render

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Thank you ^.^ any more tips?
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Isnt bad for a first try but it just looks way to chaotic.
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Umhhh Chaotic mind explaining?
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Squirt wrote:Umhhh Chaotic mind explaining?


It means there's too much going on ^^
Sometimes less is more, and more isn't always good.

The thing I didn't understnad is what your main focus was in the sig. Was that an Airplane? >.> I'm sorry if it was something else and its just me who can't tell.

You tried to add a light source, nice try =)
Your text isn't that bad, its simple, not a over-complicated font, great. But try to keep it away from the corners.
Some things you can work on is, try to make a focal. that's where people's eye will go when they first see your sig.
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the shape of the jet needs to be more defined, looks like its lost in the background
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