Working on an assignment

[Rizla]

We have to use their shitty logo to comp up a website and this is far as I have gotten, please give me any ideas, input or criticism you may have.

Also, I will attempt to participate here more, but in all honesty this is one of the first "breathers" I have gotten from working/school/gf, in fact my buddies keep coming into my room asking me when Im gonna come take a shot cause they havent seen me in a week. (And theyre my roommates, if that tells ya something ^^)

[BrokenSaint]

OMFG RIZLA

I don't know man that's pretty badass. Perhaps it'd be better if you maker the final product and show it to us.

Welcome back!

[fena]

Aye, Riz! :]
It's looking hella badass, like Broken said. I LOVE the purple and orange paint splats, and how you did the RSS feed. Everything else looks great too.
The only thing that I'm not too big of a fan of is the gun floating in the top left hand corner. It kind of seems detached and just floating in thin air. Kind of like a render just slapped onto a background.

But it's all looking good. It's all looking good.
Hope you come back and participate here more!

[CrimsonNuker]

Everything is perfect, only the paintball on the O on journals looks kinda wierd

[cin]

1 little thing

the splatters (i guess they are splatter brushes by the looks of em) on the right
side are rather flat compared to the 3d txt and stock stuff in the left. maybe an
idea to put more depth into the splashes?

for the rest, yeah looks allright.

[Luoma]

Very nice Rizla, doesn't really look like it needs any change

[BrokenSaint]

Such a nice composition. Maybe fill up more on the right?