New Style From Me YAY

[Faiien]

i made this sig today from sig requests
its my first sig moving into my new style
tell me what you guys think
c&c
personally i think its good because it has more depth and volume than my other sigs
but the flow still needs some work and composition is ok but could use some improvement
the border helps in this by adding some dramatic flair to the sig, making it look like a widescreen movie
personal rating for sig
7/10

[Azn_Pride]

i think it's 8/10.for some reason, in my eyes, the bottom left of the sig didn't really fit in but i might be crazy. overall i like it.what's the thing in the middle of the sig though?

[Faiien]

iono some kind of robot
the person who wanted the sig requested it

[TwelveEleven]

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[N1TROX]

some text on there would make it look alot better

but anyway, the middle robot looks lighten'd, and maybe sharp the sides and lower the opacity just to make it a little less blurry.


other then that gj, alot of depth:)

[SuicideGrl]

ok, props on trying a new style.

my thoughts: the center of the sig (which i would imagine is your focal) is blurred, and the outside elements (machinery?) are sharp. it draws the eye away from your focal, if the center is indeed your focal to begin with.

your choice of c4d's is nice, but i think the placement is wrong. they don't flow very well; if you rotated them so that they were coming out from your focal i think it would improve the effect. also, don't be afraid to erase parts of the c4d that you don't like or need. it'll make it seem less like you just slapped it on there.

6.5/10 from me. if you more clearly define your focal and get a bit more flow going it will be filled with win XD

[Faiien]

lol i know this isnt my best
it only took me about an hour to complete compared to my other sigs which take me like 4
but it isnt mine so....XD
anyways thx for all the comments

[TwelveEleven]

I agree with SG, and my eyes are all over, no real focal.

[WaX]

Try and smooth the edges of those c4ds, seem a lil too harsh for me.