NSR~Light

[Faiien]

hey guys
well i kept my promise and made a new sig XD
I kept everything very simple, tried not to be a c4d whore
i cant believe it was sooo hard to make, i thought the more simple the design the easier it would be but it was the exact opposite >.< it was soo hard cutting things out of the sig to keep the simple design that i wanted
took hollas advice and cut down the size of my sigs
didnt feel like it needed a border
well iam gonna stop blabbing now
hope you guys like this tag as much as i do

[HOLLAstir]

It's probably the best you've done. Atleast in my books. I'll go down the list.
Pros:
-Good color
-Like the flow
-Like the small soft brush dots you incorporated around the render's arm
-Definately a better size

Cons:
-Don't like the text, I like how you just stuck to one word though, but I would have personally moved it up and closer to the render.
-Still too empty. I would have loved to have seen some more smudging and distortions, maybe even some clipping masks to have added to flow and give it a more "completed" feeling. Right now it just feels incomplete.
-I'm a border fan, so PERSONALLY I would have liked to have seen a border
-I might be wrong, but looks like you tried to add your light source at the point/tip of his finger where the swirl comes to an end. I would have liked it to have been a tad bit brighter.

I like it, color and flow works well, It's just a little empty and could use more brushing/smudging/distortions to really complete the sig. Keep practicing your improving quickly <3

[Millenium]

I love the simpleness. Jay Chou looks hot in your sigs though not IRL
However "empty" and "simple" are different things. You can make this sig feel less empty AND be simple at the same time. I dunno how but I'm sure you can

I personally would have extended the background blue to bottom left ish, that empty area, make the text a bit less bright and put it towards left top since thats the most empty area.

I think the right part would make a great avy too. Its just so perfect and complete by itself.

[Faiien]

thx for the comment guys
and ill try and work on the things you were talking about Holla
ever since ive moved to srf ac i think ive been improving by leaps and bounds thanks to the ac community
ill try and keep a steady flow of sigs to push my improvement ^^
oooo >< i have finals soon so ill probably make a new sig on the weekends

[Somebucks4you]

dam. I so like the first sign

[YangKang]

My fav sig on this whole forum 10/10 text COULD be better but I have no idea how still awesome work 10/10!!!

[Aesthetic]

thx for the comment guys
and ill try and work on the things you were talking about Holla
ever since ive moved to srf ac i think ive been improving by leaps and bounds thanks to the ac community
ill try and keep a steady flow of sigs to push my improvement ^^
oooo >< i have finals soon so ill probably make a new sig on the weekends

i like your think sig a lot better. to me complex=creativity=leetness

i fricken like the wavy lines on the hands of the light sig though. did you make that?

[Faiien]

yes i did
and thx for the comments

[SuicideGrl]

text sucks, but the pen work is fcking AWESOME. i envy. lots.

and despite the fact that you deliberately didn't include a border, i wants one :P





mmmmm such sexy penning...

[Faiien]

ya lol i agree
i started this sig at like 8 and it was 1 when i decided that i had finished and i was really tired so i just stuck in an ariel font lol
iono, i dont think borders go well with dark sigs mayb ill make one with a border this weekend just for you and hollastir
thx

[HOLLAstir]

mayb ill make one with a border this weekend just for you and hollastir

[YangKang]

I request a tutorial for this sig!

[fena]

I request a tutorial for this sig!

Here it is:

http://www.tech-gfx.net/forum/index.php?showtopic=17236

[deep.in]

That thing around his arm looks more like tube instead of some light ray. So i dont really like it, rest is nice'n simple

[YangKang]

I request a tutorial for this sig!

Here it is:

http://www.tech-gfx.net/forum/index.php?showtopic=17236

awesome thanks

[TwelveEleven]

I request a tutorial for this sig!

Here it is:

http://www.tech-gfx.net/forum/index.php?showtopic=17236

awesome thanks

It's in about the same way I make my fire lines, so if you encounter any problems with it just ask me over msn

[Faiien]

i actually thought about that technique by looking at a banner for a website
and i adapted the string to look 3d

[TwelveEleven]

i actually thought about that technique by looking at a banner for a website
and i adapted the string to look 3d

Ah ok, btw I HATE that stock.. Rek used it once and he made her look fugly..

[Faiien]

lol did i make her look fugly?

[TwelveEleven]

lol did i make her look fugly?

Not really, but that stock just reminds me xD

[Doron]

There's this little thing with his hand tht looks strange to me, for the rest, I love it.

I love your sigs, how it is just all so centered, basic colored, and 1 worded.

You should make a collection of those things, with a half of them standing for good things, like light, faith, that kinda things, and on the other side negtivity like lost, dark, that kinda things..

I'd love to see things like that from your work.

Also, 1 thing. Your 'Lost' sig, the render is second hand. .reK once used it too..
(even though it's a beautiful one)

[rek]

The empty space on the left is killing your focal. But besides that nice work. 8/10

[Faiien]

REK IS BACK!!! YAY!!!