NSR ~ Christina

christina · Post by **christina** » Sun Jan 06, 2008 7:07 am

Well took mabye 30minutes
I think it looks clutered but i saved as wrong thing, so i really cant change anything at all. But i think it looks alright
And the text is a no no...

the_wicked · Post by **the_wicked** » Sun Jan 06, 2008 8:13 am

i wish i could do photoshop

it looks good

HOLLAstir · Post by **HOLLAstir** » Sun Jan 06, 2008 8:33 am

It's nice to see something different from you. Anyways, to me, it seems "unbalanced." You have clipping masks and smudging on the left a lot of flow from your render, then you have nothing on the right for the most part. The randomized lines going every which way is just a little too chaotic for me, and doesn't really fit the flow you established. No me gusta la text. Light source seems a bit harsh. I really liked the idea you had, reminds me of the idea I had with my Serenity sig. I just don't think it was executed too well. All in all, it's just so-so.

christina · Post by **christina** » Sun Jan 06, 2008 9:15 am

ya i didnt like it, ill mabye do something tommorow.

Dystopia · Post by **Dystopia** » Sun Jan 06, 2008 9:16 am

Bottom left of her head looks, weird, keep trying your getting good

Faiien · Post by **Faiien** » Sun Jan 06, 2008 12:59 pm

way too many clipping masks and lines

TwelveEleven · Post by **TwelveEleven** » Sun Jan 06, 2008 1:03 pm

Faiien wrote:way too many clipping masks and lines

Doesn't have to be if she makes the bg more like the render

Faiien · Post by **Faiien** » Sun Jan 06, 2008 2:58 pm

ok....i have no idea what you just said
she has way too many clipping masks on the render itself which is creating chaos within the render...

TwelveEleven · Post by **TwelveEleven** » Sun Jan 06, 2008 3:36 pm

Faiien wrote:ok....i have no idea what you just said
she has way too many clipping masks on the render itself which is creating chaos within the render...

If the bg is a little more like the render (colour and shape wise) then it can look better than it does on this bg