
New Sig: Illusion
- HOLLAstir
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New Sig: Illusion
Couldn't sleep, saw this stock and I had an idea in my head couldn't let it go. C&C <3




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didn't magisuns post that one before ? anyway i don't like that girl
check my dA : http://hemagoku.deviantart.com/ 
What's wrong with the girl? She's a cutie.
And since when has the girl and how she looks been all that matters in a Sig? That's like saying the Mona Lisa isn't worth your time to look at because she's not exactly gorgeous, no?
@ HOLLA - once again, it looks sweet as hell. And once again, I think the best thing about your Sig this time is the colors. You really have a knack for colors and color choice, and how to work them in so they all look great together. Like always, text is fantastic, and everything looks perfectly placed.
Complaints that I have:
1. I think the flare on the focal is a tiny bit too bright. Just a little bit. Maybe lower the opacity of it a tad?
2. I like the smudged effect that you have, like in the upper right hand corner. But when you get too close to the body, such as the torso, I think the smudging is a bit overdone. Maybe it's just me.
3. Where are her arms? Especially her right arm? Looks a tiny bit strange.
8/10! Definitely a good Sig, but not your best.
And since when has the girl and how she looks been all that matters in a Sig? That's like saying the Mona Lisa isn't worth your time to look at because she's not exactly gorgeous, no?
@ HOLLA - once again, it looks sweet as hell. And once again, I think the best thing about your Sig this time is the colors. You really have a knack for colors and color choice, and how to work them in so they all look great together. Like always, text is fantastic, and everything looks perfectly placed.
Complaints that I have:
1. I think the flare on the focal is a tiny bit too bright. Just a little bit. Maybe lower the opacity of it a tad?
2. I like the smudged effect that you have, like in the upper right hand corner. But when you get too close to the body, such as the torso, I think the smudging is a bit overdone. Maybe it's just me.
3. Where are her arms? Especially her right arm? Looks a tiny bit strange.
8/10! Definitely a good Sig, but not your best.
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And since when has the girl and how she looks been all that matters in a Sig? That's like saying the Mona Lisa isn't worth your time to look at because she's not exactly gorgeous, no?
lol thats strange, i made a sig of a girl once and all anyone could say was that they didnt like the girl
so ya i guess it does matter
What's wrong with the girl? She's a cutie.
beauty is in the eye of the beholder
and i agree with the over smudging part
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My eyes seem to want to go towards the text and not the render itself. Flow is not an issue here you did that great. The smudging is to repeatative to me, try changing the brush settings when you smudge and try to use different brushes (my bad if you did do that.) Id suggest bluring parts of the backround a little more at the top right corner.
To sum it up, tone down text and enhance depth.
To sum it up, tone down text and enhance depth.
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0l3n wrote:My eyes seem to want to go towards the text and not the render itself. Flow is not an issue here you did that great. The smudging is to repeatative to me, try changing the brush settings when you smudge and try to use different brushes (my bad if you did do that.) Id suggest bluring parts of the backround a little more at the top right corner.
To sum it up, tone down text and enhance depth.
Yeah, I did use different brushes and settings. When I left her under-smudged it looked more disproportionate that way compared to how it is now. Yeah I did effects to the upper right hand corner, Guess a little more wouldn't have hurt it. Anyways thanks for the comments as always
@Fena
2) When I left her body unsmudged like I said, it just looked odd. Even though it may seem a bit over done.
3) It's a stock, and in the stock she is lying down in a smokey grave site and what your seeing in my sig is basically all there is. All you see is part of her legs and that's it, no arms.
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HOLLAstir wrote:magisuns wrote:HOLLAstir wrote:magisuns wrote:magisuns only posted this b4 HOLLAnub cuz holla wuz 2 scared 2 show it at first<3
Any other comments? <3
you cannot escape the truth![]()
9\10... i just noticed she has no arms so its scaring me nao
haha that's how the stock was =/ I showed fena so yeah =P
Oh, the horror. *shudders*
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