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The green isn't what destroyed it, trust me. It just looks like a complete mess. You don't want your c4d to overlap your render then make it transparent like that. I don't really see a distinct flow. It's better then some over your others. I liked the concept, I know what you were trying to do it just wasn't executed very well. Keep practicing <3