NSR~Beauty

HavinFunSince89 · Post by **HavinFunSince89** » Mon Dec 31, 2007 10:44 am

a new sig of mine, different style. pls rate /10. hope u like it

BrokenSaint · Post by **BrokenSaint** » Mon Dec 31, 2007 10:57 am

Never saw this feminine side of you John LOL. Text doesn't fit in though, especially the font. Not really fond of the simply brushed on light source. You need to adjust the light around and on the focal too. Try to use a combination of screens and soft lights. Looks likes she has wings

HavinFunSince89 · Post by **HavinFunSince89** » Mon Dec 31, 2007 11:15 am

she really has wings

BrokenSaint · Post by **BrokenSaint** » Mon Dec 31, 2007 11:27 am

o_o show me the original stock?

You should use a different title, It's whored. >.<

HavinFunSince89 · Post by **HavinFunSince89** » Mon Dec 31, 2007 12:53 pm

http://planetrenders.net/renders/displa ... ?pos=-3663

theres the render and sorry bout the title im in a hurry no time to think. i just got what was on my mind

Faiien · Post by **Faiien** » Mon Dec 31, 2007 1:58 pm

her face is soft but the background seems too strong
but thats just my opionion
gj

HavinFunSince89 · Post by **HavinFunSince89** » Mon Dec 31, 2007 4:55 pm

eventually these r the styles I like goes the same with my Brad Pitt. I'm asking now if anyone could give me some support just like wat Broken said just to make it better. I want my styles to kick

0l3n · Post by **0l3n** » Mon Dec 31, 2007 8:36 pm

All styles "kick" if you do them right :wink:

But I like this one, just the text that bothers me.
And I like the lighting, ive always had a thing for "1click" lightsources.

cin · Post by **cin** » Mon Dec 31, 2007 10:27 pm

0l3n wrote:But I like this one, just the text that bothers me.

SAME!

HOLLAstir · Post by **HOLLAstir** » Tue Jan 01, 2008 12:45 am

Decent colors. Its alright, text bothers me aswell.

HavinFunSince89 · Post by **HavinFunSince89** » Tue Jan 01, 2008 7:03 am

thanks for all the comments and for anyone who liked it . I'll try to work on the text

LM · Post by LM » Tue Jan 01, 2008 9:52 am

The style is fine, it's the execution of the style that makes it art. I support you, but to support you, you need to learn from what we say and improve. Text does fit, it's the color it's in. On brush light source needs to be refined a little more. Her wings look like they were affected by your C4D or something. Border is okay but the colors are a little too girly. I know you can improve JC

I support you all the way, this is how i support you.