NSR-Akon

christina · Post by **christina** » Fri Dec 14, 2007 10:14 pm

Well this one took me about 20minutes, i dont think its that good, i really couldnt find out what to do, i messed with the sharpen and the distortion a little. I dont like it....
C/c, or rate ^^

aazumak · Post by **aazumak** » Fri Dec 14, 2007 11:09 pm

ok

good points:
focal
background
little swirly thingy
text isnt bad

what to work on :

ok i think your next project should be coloring
your really good all elsewhere

you have a black and white render with a solid pink background(yes shades vary(black+white), but the single pink color is there)

you need to make the background from the render,

you shouldnt just make a background, do a ctrl+u on it , then pop a render in, thats bad(usually). you need to make sigs with colors that make everything flow together

i know you like real people, and you are good with them, but just as an experiment, try taking a color anime render from like planet renders, and see what you can do, if you wait a couple hours i can come back on and find you some nice ones

(you dont have to listen to me at all, and you dont have to do this if you dont want to, you do what you want, but i think it would be fun to see what you can do)[/b]

christina · Post by **christina** » Fri Dec 14, 2007 11:13 pm

There a cloth in his pocket buy you cant really see it, its at the botom middle, thats where the red/pink came from.
Also i put the redner in first, then make the background...

aazumak · Post by **aazumak** » Fri Dec 14, 2007 11:24 pm

christina wrote:There a cloth in his pocket buy you cant really see it, its at the botom middle, thats where the red/pink came from.
Also i put the redner in first, then make the background...

i see the top tip of it

ok thats fine, but still the only thing that varies is the shade of pink, not the actual color,

and you might have put the render in 1st, but he is basically on top of the background

christina · Post by **christina** » Fri Dec 14, 2007 11:29 pm

aazumak wrote:
christina wrote:There a cloth in his pocket buy you cant really see it, its at the botom middle, thats where the red/pink came from.
Also i put the redner in first, then make the background...

i see the top tip of it

ok thats fine, but still the only thing that varies is the shade of pink, not the actual color,

and you might have put the render in 1st, but he is basically on top of the background

cant reall blend him ^^

BrokenSaint · Post by **BrokenSaint** » Sat Dec 15, 2007 5:10 am

There are tons of ways to blend him. Just a matter of finding them. I find the color choice to be hectic and too monotone.