jessica 3??

christina · Post by **christina** » Sun Dec 02, 2007 5:23 am

Well i just got back, removed some masks, and differnt text, and took vocal out, any better?

ndrog2 · Post by **ndrog2** » Sun Dec 02, 2007 5:26 am

her eyes look a little freaky

christina · Post by **christina** » Sun Dec 02, 2007 5:28 am

ndrog2 wrote:her eyes look a little freaky

i didnt do anything to them

fena · Post by **fena** » Sun Dec 02, 2007 5:56 am

Looking better. Still, a few things:

First of all, your text isn't much better. It's more obscure, and hidden - which is a good thing - but this time, it's MUCH too hidden. The font is white, against a light-colored background, making it almost invisible. Most of the times, you want your font to not be the focal point, but still be the second thing that the viewer looks at. I had to struggle to see the font; at first, I thought it was another clipping mask.
To get a font color that matches your Sig, you could just make your text a clipping mask as well. While you're trying out all those clipping masks, you might want to try that. See how it looks.

Other than that, I think it looks pretty good. But her eyes do look a bit freaky.

~ And on a side note, you don't have to keep on creating threads, you know. You can just edit your first one with your new versions, hehe. Just thought that I'd point that out.

christina · Post by **christina** » Sun Dec 02, 2007 7:01 am

ya sory about that ^^

HavinFunSince89 · Post by **HavinFunSince89** » Sun Dec 02, 2007 9:16 am

face looks blurry

ColourBlind · Post by **ColourBlind** » Sun Dec 02, 2007 11:32 am

Much better then ver. 2

cin · Post by **cin** » Sun Dec 02, 2007 2:05 pm

most of the time, its better to start all over than to just remove some things
in the current piece, you know...

Rizla · Post by **Rizla** » Mon Dec 03, 2007 4:26 am

you need a different/new render.