HOMEWORK HELP PLS

[Hitman144]

i got alot of homework today and tons of english

but i suck at english so can u so thiz 1 part of my homework, and try to help me out

i gotta make a riddle poem.

EXAMPLE:

still, i am like a mirror,
Fast, i am stronger than stone.
Wet, i can burn you,
Cold, i can keep you warm.
Life, i can be in the desert,
Death, I can be on the riverbank
What am i?

answer : water

thats an example but i need a poem thats like 1 - 2 lineslonger and better than that,

make it creative and can make it over watever u want . pls help me with thiz i suck at this kinda work. and i dont wana fail english

[Draquish]

Help...or do?

[Hitman144]

Help...or do?

do, cuz i really dont know how to make one

i am more of a math/science person,

if u can make a good on , i am being graded on creativity , if u can make one for me u will be all over my sig

[Draquish]

I pass.

It would help you more if I said "screw you" and beat you with a bamboo stick until you're finished with your poem.

Seriously, if you're too lazy to write a simple poem like the one that you where assigned, then you shouldn't be in school.

[Hitman144]

I pass.

It would help you more if I said "screw you" and beat you with a bamboo stick until you're finished with your poem.

Seriously, if you're too lazy to write a simple poem like the one that you where assigned, then you shouldn't be in school.(IMO)

dude i only suck at poems ,

the bomb in chemistry and math -.-, just asking for simple help

[Draquish]

I have never seen a 5th grader do Calculus.

That's what school is there for. Stop posting and go do your homework, ye bum.




It'll only help you in the end. I could provide you with some novice poem-writing tips. Would you like some? A link to a site maybe? Some examples of the kind of poetry you're supposed to write?


Geez, you could've gotten all the help you could ever want with about half the keyboard strokes it took to write this thread...

[Hitman144]

I have never seen a 5th grader do Calculus.

That's what school is there for. Stop posting and go do your homework, ye bum.




It'll only help you in the end. I could provide you with some novice poem-writing tips. Would you like some? A link to a site maybe? Some examples of the kind of poetry you're supposed to write? I'm here to help.

made one what grade i get on thiz one,

there one with an eye but not a head,
and ther's another with head but not a eye,
you may find the answer if you try,
and when all is said,
the answer hangs upon a thread.
What am i?

pin and needle ,

but i dont think thiz one is creative enough


help me out , give me links and everything pls

[non ego man]

I am hard as a rock
I am soft as a boobie

I bring my owner great pleasure
I bring my owner great pain

When its cold, I stay inside
When its warm, I go outside

As soon as I come, I go

What am I?

As everyone here knows by now, I am a dick.

[Hitman144]

I am hard as a rock
I am soft as a boobie

I bring my owner great pleasure
I bring my owner great pain

When its cold, I stay inside
When its warm, I go outside

As soon as I come, I go

What am I?

As everyone here knows by now, I am a dick.

wow lol inappropriate for school

[Draquish]

made one what grade i get on thiz one,

there one with an eye but not a head,
and ther's another with head but not a eye,
you may find the answer if you try,
and when all is said,
the answer hangs upon a thread.
What am i?

pin and needle ,

but i dont think thiz one is creative enough


help me out , give me links and everything pls

Good job. Of course, fix the spelling and you'll be alright.

How about...if the 1st line went something like this:

"One has an eye, but not a head.
The other a head, but not an eye."


That, plus some spelling fixes and you're good to go!

(That wasn't that hard...now was it? )

[Barotix]

I am hard as a rock
I am soft as a boobie

I bring my owner great pleasure
I bring my owner great pain

When its cold, I stay inside
When its warm, I go outside

As soon as I come, I go

What am I?

As everyone here knows by now, I am a dick.

lol that was funny

but dude seriously...
how about you make a:

rate my poem thread

and like write a bunch of poems
and see what srf thinks of em

OR

you can google your brains out

[Draquish]

lol that was funny

but dude seriously...
how about you make a:

rate my poem thread

and like write a bunch of poems
and see what srf thinks of em

Talk about forgotten threads.

http://www.silkroadforums.com/viewtopic ... light=poem

[Dystopia]

I am hard as a rock
I am soft as a boobie

I bring my owner great pleasure
I bring my owner great pain

When its cold, I stay inside
When its warm, I go outside

As soon as I come, I go

What am I?

As everyone here knows by now, I am a dick.

Hahah, propz on that

[Disconn3cted]

wow what a stupid assignment this is useless in life and as an art form it is too cheesy to be interesting

[Hitman144]

I am a tale in childrens’ minds.
I keep their secrets and share them inside.
I blur their thoughts into fantasies kept
Like a canvas of art or a submarine depth.
Though an illusion, it occurs every night;
I give them a fantasy, I give them a fright.
Nor good or bad, but always nigh’
It’s interesting to tell.
What am I?

Dream ,

ok thats the far best i can think of , rate it pls

[Draquish]

@Hitty:

Your 1st poem was better, I think you should just do some grammar and spelling fixes and stick with it.

[Hitman144]

@Hitty:

Your 1st poem was better, I think you should just do some grammar and spelling fixes and stick with it.

i think the 2nd 1 is more creative , but the 1st one is good but itz not long enough

[Silkroad]

dude wtf? u already made 3 perfectly good ridles in less than 40 minutes ...what the fux do u need help for?

[Hitman144]

dude wtf? u already made 2 perfectly good ridles in less than 40 minutes ...what the fux do u need help for?

i need help judging weather there creative and good or not