First Large Artwork - Skateboard P

BrokenSaint · Post by **BrokenSaint** » Sun Aug 26, 2007 1:21 pm

Well, I got a little tired of making sigs and I thought I could do a much larger piece of art. So here it is.

Comments, Criticism, and Suggestions are welcome.

Please Rate X/10

EDIT:

V2:

BrokenSaint · Post by **BrokenSaint** » Sun Aug 26, 2007 2:57 pm

*Bump...*

Snudge · Post by **Snudge** » Sun Aug 26, 2007 3:00 pm

It's ok, but yeah, the lighting needs work. You can't just randomly put a lightsource somewhere, look where the light somes from on the stock/render, and put it there. Also, try fooling around a bit with blending options, like trying to put the layer on lighting, and see how that looks etc.

rek · Post by **rek** » Sun Aug 26, 2007 3:03 pm

lol, didnt notice this thread. Im just finishing a few essays on english. I think its getting more useless cuz im doing poetry.

ontopic: Nice work on the colours. My only problem with this is the lightsource. And the text could b upped.

cin · Post by **cin** » Sun Aug 26, 2007 3:10 pm

1st of all, i like the way the bg effects blend in with the tattoos.
2nd, i really like the thingy on his t-shirt.
3rd, you have some kind of light source above his head, but nowhere
in the render where you put the light effects.
4th, im not good enough to notice anything else. i just like it

8/10

CrimsonNuker · Post by **CrimsonNuker** » Sun Aug 26, 2007 5:18 pm

Lol, it looks like hes on fire *splashes water on screen*

aazumak · Post by **aazumak** » Sun Aug 26, 2007 6:37 pm

colors r nice, i love the texture etc, i even like ur lighting, i think its 9.5/10

I would even go as far as erasing his design on his shirt and putting in a BS

Broken Saint

BS

lol

BrokenSaint · Post by **BrokenSaint** » Mon Aug 27, 2007 12:49 am

Here's a V2:

Post by **dom** » Mon Aug 27, 2007 1:41 am

I think you might of overdone it with the "paste render use brushes".

That's usually only used in sigs because their small size doesn't make it overwhelming.

BrokenSaint · Post by **BrokenSaint** » Mon Aug 27, 2007 2:20 am

Well I got a stock and did what I could with it. The only brushing I did was the light source at the top or is that what you're talking about?

Post by **dom** » Mon Aug 27, 2007 2:33 am

BrokenSaint wrote:Well I got a stock and did what I could with it. The only brushing I did was the light source at the top or is that what you're talking about?

I'm talking about the technique in general. The style of just adding random renders and using downloaded brushes. That doesn't work on sizes bigger than a sig.

That's also why I suck at sigs, and much better at larger pieces.

BrokenSaint · Post by **BrokenSaint** » Mon Aug 27, 2007 2:55 am

dom wrote:
BrokenSaint wrote:Well I got a stock and did what I could with it. The only brushing I did was the light source at the top or is that what you're talking about?

I'm talking about the technique in general. The style of just adding random renders and using downloaded brushes. That doesn't work on sizes bigger than a sig.

That's also why I suck at sigs, and much better at larger pieces.

Oh, ok I'll keep that in mind, but I didn't really brush much I used the smudge tool a lot though.

Dystopia · Post by **Dystopia** » Mon Aug 27, 2007 3:00 am

Colors are nice, some erasing flaws, maybe erase some effects over his left arm...

And does pharrell board?

Overall good job

BrokenSaint · Post by **BrokenSaint** » Mon Aug 27, 2007 3:05 am

Dystopia wrote:Colors are nice, some erasing flaws, maybe erase some effects over his left arm...

And does pharrell board?

Overall good job

Thanks.

Yeah, he does.

Perhaps I should erase that part.