Collaboration: Bones & Knuckles

Knuckles · Post by **Knuckles** » Tue Aug 21, 2007 5:10 pm

Well, me and bones are friends in real life, and I thought it would be cool if we did a collab. together, so I asked him, and he said yes.

This is how it turned out:

C&C are welcome,
~Knuckles

0l3n · Post by **0l3n** » Tue Aug 21, 2007 7:22 pm

I think the pentooling is to big, but the rest is quite nice.

Knuckles · Post by **Knuckles** » Tue Aug 21, 2007 7:29 pm

What do you mean by pen tooling?

cin · Post by **cin** » Tue Aug 21, 2007 7:31 pm

he means the glowy lines me thinks.

if so, i agree with him on that. they kind of overrule the rest of the sig.
and one more thing.. i like the movie border, but you could have put more
depth in the sig if you for example put a part of your borders behind the
glowy lines or something. the sig looks a bit flat this way because the border
is layed over the complete thing.

0l3n · Post by **0l3n** » Tue Aug 21, 2007 7:31 pm

The glowing lines.

Knuckles · Post by **Knuckles** » Tue Aug 21, 2007 7:36 pm

Yeah, I tried to go for the look of the glow-lines sort of weaving in and out of the film border thing, but couldn't quite get it right, same with the lines. They were a bit too big, and I tried to make them smaller lol, but it's hard to get the right curve with such a small line

Bones · Post by **Bones** » Tue Aug 21, 2007 7:51 pm

I did the beginning then knuckles tried to correct my mistakes

BrokenSaint · Post by **BrokenSaint** » Tue Aug 21, 2007 10:14 pm

I could've sworn I saw that as a vector wallpaper on deviantART. If you guys did take it from there, shouldn't you be asking for permission to use it? Unless it has the Creative Commons License, at least give credits to the author unless the CC states no derivative works.

0l3n · Post by **0l3n** » Tue Aug 21, 2007 10:18 pm

BrokenSaint wrote:I could've sworn I saw that as a vector wallpaper on deviantART. If you guys did take it from there, shouldn't you be asking for permission to use it? Unless it has the Creative Commons License, at least give credits to the author unless the CC states no derivative works.

What the guy and the girl?

Knuckles · Post by **Knuckles** » Tue Aug 21, 2007 10:20 pm

Nope, It's just a black ellipse for the hill, and the two people are a preset brush. The white sparklies, and stuff are just white brushing set to soft light, and with outer glow on the sparklies.

Not ripped.

Rizla · Post by **Rizla** » Tue Aug 21, 2007 10:32 pm

Looking like the start to a solid piece. Im not digging the visitor text because its edged and because it conflicts with the "fall."

ditch the corder and the collaboration text imo.
the stroke is a 'tad' awkward, but not to the point that I would give it formal criticism, the feeling I get is minute to the point that I believe it could be purely subjective.

So yeah besides the border/collab text I really like it. Close to sexy.

edit-

I figured out why I hated the border. If that was a filmstrip, each frame of it would look the same to our eyes. ( well very close to the same if it were recorded for 29.97 FPS)