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Navy Seals sig- comment,suggestion your welcome

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I just want some comment about my recent sig feel free to criticize,suggest its up to you :)

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I love the military icons such as the Navy Seals. I also play Socom :P

I give it 9/10: Simple, not overdrawn, my favourite color :D

I simply love it,
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The focal in the sig isnt very clear. Ans text colour could b better. Mayb if you look at some tuts and you could learn a thing or two. And the quality looks like its lowered.
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Text? I don't see any?
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Look round the gun.
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WOW! :shock:

That is so dark, you could so brighten the text up a bit, the font looks okay though, we'd have to see if a little brighter.

Nice work though,
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Post by HavinFunSince89 »

ok I appreciate your criticism and also your suggestions I hope next time Ill make a better one, more clear :D thanks anyways

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Post by Shadowman20818 »

You don't have to sign your name after every post, that's the point of the signature. Image

I think you could've done more with water effects since you choose such a dark theme, and seals.
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haven't seen those two new sigs of yours John.


I agree with Rek. John please take Kevin's advice and learn the basics better. I'm not hattin' but i'm just helping you become a better designer.
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Hehe, those who don't know, LM, HavinFunSince89 and I are close buddies. :P We fool around a lot. Oh yeah, I'm Kevin. :O

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Contrast balance needs work, text cant do much if you cant read it.
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reK wrote:The focal in the sig isnt very clear. Ans text colour could b better. Mayb if you look at some tuts and you could learn a thing or two. And the quality looks like its lowered.


I believe he followed this Tut:
http://www.tech-gfx.net/forum/index.php?showtopic=10164

I believe in that guy's final version, he added text in the exact same area that you did. I have to admit, yours turned out quite a bit better than mine, although I'm going to have to say that I don't think it's clear enough - your render is much too blended in. On top of that, like everyone else stated, the text is much too dark.
Other than that, it looks good. 7/10 from me.

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Post by Bones »

If it was me I would keep the text the same, or take it off altogether. :D

- btw the seal or w/e looks stoned. :!:
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Post by dom »

text needs to be brightened, right now it looks like just some random highlighting in the sig. Try playing with the levels on it, here's just an example of what levels can do:

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