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I havent looked up many tutorials for cool text... yet.

Edit: Ok, I tried to make the robot guy more of the focal point by putting him right in in the middle and making him a bit brighter.

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There isnt a strong focal in this. My eyes are moving evrywhere.

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reK wrote:There isnt a strong focal in this. My eyes are moving evrywhere.

6/10


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all the lights at the left of the robot kinda ruined it, there is no focus and the Ninja Hat Rice stuff is really...random, you need a border also.

The robot is made pretty well though, 5/10 but if you can fix it you can get a 9/10.

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Vorobev wrote:all the lights at the left of the robot kinda ruined it, there is no focus and the Ninja Hat Rice stuff is really...random, you need a border also.

The robot is made pretty well though, 5/10 but if you can fix it you can get a 9/10.


Define Border.
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CrimsonNuker wrote:
Vorobev wrote:all the lights at the left of the robot kinda ruined it, there is no focus and the Ninja Hat Rice stuff is really...random, you need a border also.

The robot is made pretty well though, 5/10 but if you can fix it you can get a 9/10.


Define Border.


a border is a border

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Vorobev wrote:
CrimsonNuker wrote:
Vorobev wrote:all the lights at the left of the robot kinda ruined it, there is no focus and the Ninja Hat Rice stuff is really...random, you need a border also.

The robot is made pretty well though, 5/10 but if you can fix it you can get a 9/10.


Define Border.


a border is a border

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And you call yourself a photoshop master.
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My border were those black lines at the top and bottom. I'll see what it looks like with them on the sides. Thanks for your advice, gonna see if I can make this better.

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I like the second one, the first one wasnt very appealing.

only criticism on second one, do something with the text... Its bringing it down =/

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I liked the first one just because it had the orange and blue tone in it, it reminds of me Rizla's sig
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Where is Riz? :roll:
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I dont know, hes a mysterious one
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Vacation? Relaxing? Tech-GFX?

:P lol
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Lyrikk wrote:I like the second one, the first one wasnt very appealing.

only criticism on second one, do something with the text... Its bringing it down =/

6/10


Yeah... *searches up tutorials* now which one to try...

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Dystopia wrote:Vacation? Relaxing? Tech-GFX?

:P lol

Heh, more like playing sro.l

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Vorobev wrote:all the lights at the left of the robot kinda ruined it, there is no focus and the Ninja Hat Rice stuff is really...random, you need a border also.

The robot is made pretty well though, 5/10 but if you can fix it you can get a 9/10.


I see a clear border. :?
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lol dont worry the "master" doesnt know about movie borders.
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reK wrote:Where is Riz? :roll:


Lol, yeah been spending what little offtime I had playing SRO :D And I was busy making this:

http://66.192.104.111/~jsteffens/wpr/fi ... /index.php
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I effing love movie borders.

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BrokenSaint wrote:I effing love movie borders.


they call that letterboxing
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rizlas back?!
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iBilly wrote:
Vorobev wrote:all the lights at the left of the robot kinda ruined it, there is no focus and the Ninja Hat Rice stuff is really...random, you need a border also.

The robot is made pretty well though, 5/10 but if you can fix it you can get a 9/10.


I see a clear border. :?


Yeah just ignore him
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