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I bore myself when I look at this, dunno what to add in the background and around the render, suggestions?
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1) get typography, not 1 pixel scribbles
2) needs contrast on the right side, just looks white/faded
3) left to ride is too contrasting, they seem like seperate images pasted together
4) needs to be clearer in general, looks sloppy
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dom wrote:1) get typography, not 1 pixel scribbles
2) needs contrast on the right side, just looks white/faded
3) left to ride is too contrasting, they seem like seperate images pasted together
4) needs to be clearer in general, looks sloppy

that's touch up stuff AFTER I add more stuff, I don't wanna have to color balance/select color before all my renders are in, I don't know what to put in, more lightning? a building?

You know, abstract render etc. I'm searching around but I really don't know. I mean, right now it's basically it's a render and paintbucketed background with very rough brushing stuff, and a pasted on text, I want more things in the sig before I do the final things including what you mentioned.
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There's already lots of stuff in there. And final touches aren't final, if you do plan to add stuff you're going to have to fix the balance issues so you know what you're working with.
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I always try and do too much (refer to second SC2 sig), I'll see what I can do, edit tommorow, ty dom.
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Bump, edit, still looks like crap, still need help, bump^
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