Improving Time

Grim · Post by **Grim** » Sun Jul 08, 2007 6:05 pm

Alright,

This is the sig I choose to try to make it really good.

How can I improve this sig, all critiscm will be accepted.
OLD ONE:

NEW ONE:

TwelveEleven · Post by **TwelveEleven** » Sun Jul 08, 2007 10:38 pm

It's pretty nice, but imo you should change the font, something need. And perhaps use the other colors in bowser instead of green.

Overall pretty nice 7.5/10

And maybe use the border like aazumak, he made a tut. Read my comment on it as that's a bit faster

bluey · Post by **bluey** » Sun Jul 08, 2007 11:32 pm

I agree with Twelve, its really nice, but in my opinion it needs a changing of the text style or coloring. Its really hard to critique someones work though because every artist has their own unique approach to art.

Anywho, I rate it a 7.86 / 10 xD

cin · Post by **cin** » Sun Jul 08, 2007 11:39 pm

yay i <3 it when the character pops out.

be sure to save it as a *.gif image to keep the transparency otherwise
it will look weird on blue. if you save as .gif you might want to upload
it to http://www.xs.to cuz i think photobucket doesnt do gif files..

TwelveEleven · Post by **TwelveEleven** » Mon Jul 09, 2007 12:08 am

photobucket <3 *.gif images.. Check my photobucket page, it has some animated gifs, Anyways use .png if you have a none animated transparent image.

Dugu · Post by **Dugu** » Mon Jul 09, 2007 12:10 am

The light on the right should be mirrored on the left, the background should be a little more visible so turn the opacity up, the border can be a little bigger but it's classy now so I don't feel too strongly about it, if you're going to be hiding your text behind the very good looking bowser render then maybe hide it more, if you only hide a little bit it looks like an error rather than deliberate, and maybe have a bit more contrast in the background, between the dark and light green.

Well, that was a long run-on sentence, just imagine it all said in one breath. Also, you need the signature, Nintendo patented, flashing seizure lights.

TwelveEleven · Post by **TwelveEleven** » Mon Jul 09, 2007 12:17 am

You made an account just to say that? :shock:

Anyways I don't agree with you on the text part. It doesn't look like an error to me.

Grim · Post by **Grim** » Mon Jul 09, 2007 2:48 pm

Ok, I updated my first post with the requests.

Please, Anything could help it, Riz,Ell,Rek Please critize me.