NSR~Searching

rek · Post by **rek** » Sat Jul 07, 2007 4:46 am

v1

v2

Finished and 20 minutes of thinking and 20 minutes of working.

Advice, comments and -/10 please

the.dead.illusion · Post by **the.dead.illusion** » Sat Jul 07, 2007 4:49 am

did u use c4d? 8/10

rek · Post by **rek** » Sat Jul 07, 2007 4:51 am

i used 1 effects c4d

Rizla · Post by **Rizla** » Sat Jul 07, 2007 7:22 am

your text is hard to read, I think the effects went over the budget your focal could handle, my eyes dont wanna go near your focal, its drawn to the (albeit well done) effects, which overpower everything else.

So, V. Nice effects, personally, I would tone them down and create a bit more depth to improve flow into the focal, and give the text a bit more contrast from whatever is behind it.

6.995/10 (round up, just felt like pingin ya

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Dystopia · Post by **Dystopia** » Sat Jul 07, 2007 7:28 am

rek · Post by **rek** » Sat Jul 07, 2007 5:40 pm

added an new v. Focal better?

Dystopia · Post by **Dystopia** » Sat Jul 07, 2007 6:07 pm

its better but the boarder kinda killed it..