NSR~ -/10- Transformers Jazz

runtypoo · Post by **runtypoo** » Fri Jul 06, 2007 9:59 am

hey i just saw Transformers and i really liked it
i got bored and made a new sig. Didn't take long but meh.
Please give me feedback and constructive criticism please.
Rate it -/10.

Thanks

there tis.

cin · Post by **cin** » Fri Jul 06, 2007 10:03 am

i cant see Jazz oO

its a bit emty too imo

6,5/10

Dystopia · Post by **Dystopia** » Fri Jul 06, 2007 11:56 am

I watched it too, focal isnt clear

whos jazz?

there optimis prime
ratchet
bumble bee

i dun remember the rest

Zypher · Post by **Zypher** » Fri Jul 06, 2007 12:14 pm

Jazz was teh Pontiac Solstice

runtypoo · Post by **runtypoo** » Fri Jul 06, 2007 12:15 pm

jazz is the sports car that megatron rips in half

Dystopia · Post by **Dystopia** » Fri Jul 06, 2007 12:23 pm

oh yeah the small one..

Zypher · Post by **Zypher** » Fri Jul 06, 2007 1:18 pm

RIP Jazz<33
the more i look at the sig, i like it more and more.

TwelveEleven · Post by **TwelveEleven** » Fri Jul 06, 2007 1:21 pm

Don't make jazz sigs, he died

. And in a shitty way too :cry:

<<constructive criticism>> - reK 3/10

Rizla · Post by **Rizla** » Fri Jul 06, 2007 5:00 pm

TwelveEleven wrote:<<constructive criticism>>

not an appropriate critiquing comment

I think the sig is too confused, and it would be hard to do a B/W transformers tag. I just saw the movie too ^^ loved it, think Ill do a bumblebee or a starscream tag soon.

Post by **dom** » Fri Jul 06, 2007 5:57 pm

What transformer?

TwelveEleven · Post by **TwelveEleven** » Fri Jul 06, 2007 5:59 pm

A muvee, cartoon, game.

Post by **dom** » Fri Jul 06, 2007 6:42 pm

I meant: in the sig.

MastaChiefX · Post by **MastaChiefX** » Fri Jul 06, 2007 6:43 pm

Jazz.
The sports car.

Ell · Post by **Ell** » Fri Jul 06, 2007 6:53 pm

Probably means he can't really see it.

CrimsonNuker · Post by **CrimsonNuker** » Fri Jul 06, 2007 9:36 pm

Throw some colour in it

and "Jazz is the one that gets ripped in half" LMAO

runtypoo · Post by **runtypoo** » Sat Jul 07, 2007 12:55 am

thanks for the criticism guys.
yeh i thought it was a bit dark im gonna try to make it lighter.
but its kinda hard because jazz is a silver pontiac.
but ill try. the BG is a stock from the movie.

And Jazz is the cool one and then Megatron has to be all **** and is like ~BOOM! rip you in half. How funny is it when like Megatron comes and owns Optimus then kicks that human.

Post by **dom** » Sat Jul 07, 2007 1:07 am

runtypoo wrote:thanks for the criticism guys.
yeh i thought it was a bit dark im gonna try to make it lighter.
but its kinda hard because jazz is a silver pontiac.
but ill try. the BG is a stock from the movie.

And Jazz is the cool one and then Megatron has to be all **** and is like ~BOOM! rip you in half. How funny is it when like Megatron comes and owns Optimus then kicks that human.

Try just playing with the level settings.