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Nave47
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Hows my Work?Updated(Sig and Ava)

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From this :

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To this :

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Edit : Heres the new one. (I'm beggining to think that I really SUCK).

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Heres my new sig:

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Suggestions and Criticism is ALWAYS welcome. I'm still learning so maybe you can tell what im doing wrong.
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I like it, can't really say anything bad about it! :)
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RuYi wrote:I like it, can't really say anything bad about it! :)


Thanks.... I wish someone can tell something bad about it so I can know what im doing wrong.
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Hmm well you can maybe put more contrast into it to make the background have more depth. If you used a color balance, try setting to hard light and see how that looks.
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Post by naljamees51 »

i agree...just litl more brightness/contrast (if ur usindg ps :) )
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Thanks for the comments I'll try what you guys said, When I can get free time off my study.
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Post by Key-J »

I like it, but yest as mentioned before, possibly more contrast between the Background n Forground.

Also, i would make the Face more sharp, leaving the background a bit faded or blurry, but ever so slightly.

I think it might give a good effect.
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New stuff... Check my new sig.
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Post by rek »

ur new one looks a lot better
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It would look better if you either put some text in, or moved the render in a diff spot, maybe showing more of the face.

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Post by Alphanum3ric »

Nice render... nice blending... but u got it bad on the border and the letring...
TRy another way... but its a decente work! :)
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