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ok i need help, my friend has asked me to proof read something for her but thing is im not very good at that sort of thing i just didnt want to let her down if anyone on here is good at spotting mistakes, grammar or knows what to look for in this sort of thing please help, dont change any of the actual document just write in red or highlight what you see wrong with it il pass it back to her a bit later

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Good lord.

TL:DR.

Oh wel, as long as she's smart enough to know the difference between send and sent she'll be fine.

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yeh she knows the difference, i know the diff between the above thankfully
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tl;dr mens :(

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Gladiator_RN wrote:tl;dr mens :(
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curious whats the point in posted in this thread if you deem it tl;dr? the answer is non so quit bumping your post count you cheap trolls, if your going to troll atleast do it properly, thats non an open invite to be a dick either
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What grade level is she in so we have an idea of what to expect. I don't have any time to read tonight... I'll look over it tomorrow if I can.
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last year of uni so i guess its for a degree
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I think you're asking too much from SRF. It's for the last year of Uni and it's quite long. Don't think you will get alot of help. I tried to read the first part, but I must say that it's not the length that's holding me back but rather the boringness of the main subject.
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Read some random parts and it looked good ( grammicaly ) and she sure put effort in it but what's up with all that **** .

I did some proof reading before but none to something that large and only to what i was interested in .
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[SD]Master_Wong wrote:last year of uni so i guess its for a degree

If it is, then she should do it herself.

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heroo wrote:I think you're asking too much from SRF. It's for the last year of Uni and it's quite long. Don't think you will get alot of help. I tried to read the first part, but I must say that it's not the length that's holding me back but rather the boringness of the main subject.


i know i had to turn off distractions so i could get though it and did find a couple things off but not much, you are right about it been a lot to ask from srf but hey if you cant help you cant its not the end of the world, deffo better then kids asking us to do their homework for them with this the work is done its just the grulling task of finding errors and editing fyi we dont do the editing part thats all hers
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[SD]Master_Wong wrote:curious whats the point in posted in this thread if you deem it tl;dr? the answer is non so quit bumping your post count you cheap trolls, if your going to troll atleast do it properly, thats non an open invite to be a dick either


I think she was trolling you when she asked for you to edit her paper.
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Tasdik wrote:
[SD]Master_Wong wrote:last year of uni so i guess its for a degree

If it is, then she should do it herself.


We (my group of friends) usually have several people proof read our papers. You'd be amazed what you will read over in your own papers that will stick out like a sore thumb to others.

He's not asking us to write it for her.

That said, I haven't touched it yet and won't until later.
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EvGa wrote:
Tasdik wrote:
[SD]Master_Wong wrote:last year of uni so i guess its for a degree

If it is, then she should do it herself.


We (my group of friends) usually have several people proof read our papers. You'd be amazed what you will read over in your own papers that will stick out like a sore thumb to others.

He's not asking us to write it for her.

That said, I haven't touched it yet and won't until later. According to Dom, it could be dangerous.


I edited my post. It felt inhumane.
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dom wrote:I edited my post. It felt inhumane.


but it was right.
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dom wrote:I edited my post. It felt inhumane.


It is done.
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couldn't get past the introduction it was so dry.
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TL:DR. More so because the subject matter is of little interest to me sorry.
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Hey guys, please proof read this and highlight all mistakes for me so I can later fordward it to the hot gurl and be the hero.

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Therefore, staging this particular work contained a great deal of uncertainty and the need for taking huge risks.

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[SD]Master_Wong wrote:ok i need help, my friend has asked me to proof read something for her but thing is im not very good at that sort of thing i just didnt want to let her down if anyone on here is good at spotting mistakes, grammar or knows what to look for in this sort of thing
Seriously, It doesn't matter if you can't. You should do it anyway!
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The components can be broken down into the following: dance and movement, character portrayal, masks/puppetry, music, idealistic process and inspirations. Each component will be analysed in detail in an attempt to portray how this effectiveness has added to the overall musical vision.

I found another one!

If the introduction paragraph is any indication, this paper is terrible. I can't get through a sentence without being mired in awkward transitions, repetitive language, and passive voice. In fact, she's so passive that I'm beginning to think instead of her writing an essay the essay is using her as a medium through which it can manifest in a physical form. But I suppose you still need to do a good deed so kindly tell her that her spell check is malfunctioning.

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Macsnow wrote:Hey guys, please proof read this and highlight all mistakes for me so I can later fordward it to the hot gurl and be the hero.

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i work with her boyfriend so no
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tl;dr :S
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Ringtone wrote:tl;dr :S


get bent you fucking troll, if you read up you would have noticed the surge of other people like you who have nothing better to do then boost post count ie like apam, sure a forum is for posting but the idea behind it is the sharing of information like storys, pictures & videos to name a few not to post a 8 character reply which dont even resemble a word, if you dont have anything at all useful to add why fucking post...
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honestly mate... if this girl asked you to do this... you're not good at it, and you don't wanna **** her... why the **** did you accept. Besides, good thing you don't wanna **** her anyway, cause if you did you just let your chances go by accepting the job

be her bitch, good luck
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IceCrash wrote:honestly mate... if this girl asked you to do this... you're not good at it, and you don't wanna **** her... why the **** did you accept. Besides, good thing you don't wanna **** her anyway, cause if you did you just let your chances go by accepting the job

be her bitch, good luck



because shes a friend i tried to help, isnt that what friends do, besides she will have others reading it besides me so ultimatly it dont matter what i do but id like to help in some way and i figure a forum of 10K registered members and prolly 1k+ active users would be able to help
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if you were a real friend of her, you wouldn't waste her time and just say no, since you aren't good at such thing
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IceCrash wrote:honestly mate... if this girl asked you to do this... you're not good at it, and you don't wanna **** her... why the **** did you accept. Besides, good thing you don't wanna **** her anyway, cause if you did you just let your chances go by accepting the job

be her bitch, good luck


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