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Right side ; Good blending.
Left side; Mediocre blending.

I like, would add more effects.
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ExSoldier wrote:Right side ; Good blending.
Left side; Mediocre blending.

this + text is mehh. (it's like the theKnight's early texts D:)
oh and think the light on the fingers of his right hand might be off.
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The bg is really good, I like it. Has a "TEH GATES OF HELL ARE OPENING!!!" feel, looks really nice.

Minor: Make the light source more apparent, it's placed well and everything, it just needs to pop out a bit more. (I'm talking about the yellow spot on the upper right, if that was an unintentional light source, then lie to me and make it better (: )
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Major: Lose the 1px stroke on the focal. It ruins the blending completely and makes it seem like you just slapped him on. Try blending him in some more to make it all tie in and look like he belongs in the sig. Also, to improve blending, add some foreground effects. Put some of that red blood looking stuff on the left over the guy to blend him in some more.
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Overall, it isn't half bad. It just needs some retouching with the basics in mind.
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poehalcho wrote:
ExSoldier wrote:Right side ; Good blending.
Left side; Mediocre blending.

this + text is mehh. (it's like the theKnight's early texts D:)
oh and think the light on the fingers of his right hand might be off.

The text is really meh, not 'blended,' doesn't look right. the whole left side of the sig just doesn't fit, background is really blatant, and the render in no shape or form fits in the background lol. the right side is really good, the lighting could be a bit brighter, and I don't get the line going around the render lol
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Lol @ right side is better than left.

Left side has more things going on and gives the sig something nice to look at, therefore left > right. The right side is pretty empty.

Only problem with the left is the blending of the render, which is easily fixed.
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Kraq wrote:Lol @ right side is better than left.

Left side has more things going on and gives the sig something nice to look at, therefore left > right. The right side is pretty empty.

Only problem with the left is the blending of the render, which is easily fixed.

Correct me if I'm wrong, but isn't the word 'better' referencing an opinion?
My opinion is always right though...
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