[Criticism] I need some comments on my video!

[apan]

Hey guys, i decided to make an SRO vid just for fun Vegas is new to me so dont jugde me too hard okey ;D As I said, I need some tips and tricks, what can I improve? And since this is only a preview there are some minor flaws

Dont forget HD

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rns2BPDk7w8

I would appreciate some criticism

[Desgraciada]

Nothing to say about it.. cause there's nothing in it.. only an intro.

[apan]

Nothing to say about it.. cause there's nothing in it.. only an intro.

Yeah but i thought you could say saomething about the effects, audio sync, well i dont know xD Anything

[Pan_Raider(`_´)]

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[yt]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rns2BPDk7w8[/yt]

embed pls mens

edit:
OT: not sure what to expect from this

[Fiction]

Even tho there wasn't anything to it footage wise, I liked the feel of it. Reminded me of the movies we used to make in dEranged. I don't like how all the movies now are just pvp with lens filter and zooming in and out 20x a second...

[_Sir_Thalas_]

good timing (vid and music), I don't like the music tho
over used that effect on the letters
why show those things from 0:20 to 0:28?
try showing some thieving/skills

[Jambi]

i hate the music

[apan]

good timing (vid and music), I don't like the music tho
over used that effect on the letters
why show those things from 0:20 to 0:28?
try showing some thieving/skills

First of all thanks for your comment.

Well as I said i'm new to both video editing and vegas so i dont know any good effects, so i just threw that stuff in there to try it out and yea its a little too much

As i said this is a preview, and this was meant to be the intro of the complete vid, and i didnt really know what i was going to film next sp i went out and shot the intro clipps and then made the intro, and when i was going to shoot some more footage I had been disconnected :@ So i didnt have anything else to show =/

[Gladiator_RN]

Not bad, next time try to show some more info about your video in the preview. ( not with text but with records).

[*BlackFox]

^ Yeah.. I kinda agree!

[apan]

Not bad, next time try to show some more info about your video in the preview. ( not with text but with records).

Okey, but this was acctully meant to be the intro for the complete video but i didnt have the time to make it so i just uploaded it as a preview so get some tips so i wouldnt fail on the complete video ;D

[_Sir_Thalas_]

good timing (vid and music), I don't like the music tho
over used that effect on the letters
why show those things from 0:20 to 0:28?
try showing some thieving/skills

First of all thanks for your comment.

Well as I said i'm new to both video editing and vegas so i dont know any good effects, so i just threw that stuff in there to try it out and yea its a little too much

As i said this is a preview, and this was meant to be the intro of the complete vid, and i didnt really know what i was going to film next sp i went out and shot the intro clipps and then made the intro, and when i was going to shoot some more footage I had been disconnected :@ So i didnt have anything else to show =/

yes, I was just giving random ideas, effects are easy to find and the internet is full of tutorials (take a look). I didn't try to be mean , but repeating effects it's kinda boring.

At the end our opinion it's not that important but how good it looks for you

[asusi]

This belongs in Artist Corner

[BloodyBlade]

Light rays effect ftw.