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-- Render : Code Geass -- I'd like you guys to pay attention to the location of the font. I'm having a hard time with it and trying to follow the rule of thirds. -- One thing that also bothers me his collar going through the light source. I tried to erase but it looked even worse -- Critics,Rate,Comments,etc.
Darker Red
Purple Eyezz ]
Last edited by Skyve on Wed Jul 28, 2010 11:36 pm, edited 2 times in total.
The word 'Geass' is overly bright, and draws my eyes to THAT. It's basically a tug of war between that text, and lelouch's eyes. Try dulling the red down a bit on the Geass word. The small text below annoys me :/
Heosphoros wrote:The word 'Geass' is overly bright, and draws my eyes to THAT. It's basically a tug of war between that text, and lelouch's eyes. Try dulling the red down a bit on the Geass word. The small text below annoys me :/
I didn't know the guy was called Lelouch I wanna keep the small text but I'll try to change the red.
EDIT: Making the red darker was actually a good idea,I like it better.
poehalcho wrote:I need to say it D: remove the glow on the eyes, or drastically lower it >_< it ruins everything.
do people honestly take ur "critiques" seriously? ur almost as bad as ns was
I say what comes to my mind.
When I look at the sig, I notice that the glow around the eyes seems out of place. or simply too large.
and you might not have noticed it, but most people come to pretty much the same conclusion as me on many occasions (not always, but not nearly never)... they just choose their words more carefully/professionally than I do.
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poehalcho wrote:I need to say it D: remove the glow on the eyes, or drastically lower it >_< it ruins everything.
do people honestly take ur "critiques" seriously? ur almost as bad as ns was
I say what comes to my mind.
When I look at the sig, I notice that the glow around the eyes seems out of place. or simply too large.
and you might not have noticed it, but most people come to pretty much the same conclusion as me on many occasions (not always, but not nearly never)... they just choose their words more carefully/professionally than I do.
Although I respect positive and negative critics. I don't agree on your point that everyone comes down to the same conclusion. If we go by your saying, no one likes the "red glow" just some people won't express it. What dosn't look nice to you may look nice to someone else.
ExSoldier wrote: Although I respect positive and negative critics. I don't agree on your point that everyone comes down to the same conclusion. If we go by your saying, no one likes the "red glow" just some people won't express it. What dosn't look nice to you may look nice to someone else.
I said not always.
btw. an easy fix might simply be to make it more purple instead of red. it just kind of curses with his eyes. purple eyes with red glow looks awkward.
Day[9] wrote:"Tea is a lot like gold expansions - it helps you kill people." - Day[9] Daily 337 -
ExSoldier wrote: Although I respect positive and negative critics. I don't agree on your point that everyone comes down to the same conclusion. If we go by your saying, no one likes the "red glow" just some people won't express it. What dosn't look nice to you may look nice to someone else.
I said not always.
btw. an easy fix might simply be to make it more purple instead of red. it just kind of curses with his eyes. purple eyes with red glow looks awkward.
You said "not always,but not nearly never" which honestly dosn't make any sense. But I'm always opened for improvements so I'll try a purple glow on his eyes,brb
a darker purple (this is pink), but I already like it much better ^_^
not always, but not nearly never = not always, yet not (even remotely) never
either way, keep up the good work, you are one of my more favorable artist here cause you actually show and use colours, instead of camouflaging them with 15 light filters.
Day[9] wrote:"Tea is a lot like gold expansions - it helps you kill people." - Day[9] Daily 337 -
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