Sexy girl draw {NSFW}

[LaloHao]

Just finished this minutes ago

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Comments?
(I don't even know if i can post this because it shows something, if it's not allowed then i'll just remove it)

[vietxboy911]

she has abs of a man T_T

[Shomari]

she has abs of a man T_T

Lol agreed.

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But looks good except the hands look a bit funny.

Right hand looks to small
Left hand seems to be out of proportion.

[LaloHao]

she has abs of a man T_T

I think that makes her sexy, on the other hand maybe they are actually too manly lol

[Fiction]

Right hand looks too small

It's her strong hand.

she has abs of a man T_T

I'd definitely think something was up if I seen a girl with these abs =)

-I almost wanna say this is allowed because its done in an artistic way... not like a trashy NSFW sig...

[Skyve]

Well done but the abs kinda ruins it. KIU

[Noobs_Slayer]

In my opinion he has big boobs and muscular hands

[Majorharper]

No one noticed the legs? Did you amputate them? gee O.o

[Heosphoros]

I'm gonna be blunt:
-It looks like shit
I have no idea where to start, so I'll just go from top to bottom.
*The hair is way to messy, and disorganized. It's also too 'edgey' or 'sharp'
*It also shows no variation in shading whatsoever, shadings should go from dark to light, and vice versa. Shadings are not meant to "fill in white", there meant to emphasis 3D effects onto a 2D object. Your shading is also all over the place, and have no consistency in where they should be(seen on the hands, and elbows)
*The entire image looks off proportion, although I can't tell until I see your original reference, the hand on the left side, in contrast to the right hand side do not match up with the perspective given, the left hand sides elbows, going up towards the hand, slims too much.
*There is no line weight, it's took me at least a minute or two to recognize where the neck, breast, elbows, arm, hair, etc separate.
*The abdomen is too strongly defined(unless she actually has Ab's like that)
*The legs have a weird perspective, the shading on the right hand side thigh, makes it appear at a strange angle, suggesting that they should at least show some of her feet, if not legs continuing from the other side.


Advice:
*Try reading these shading techniques/tips. If this is too complex to understand, Google: Shading Techniques. There should be at least 4 mentioned. Smudge/Scumble, Hatching, Cross Hatching and Stippling.

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*I always refer to this video before tackling on drawing hair, just watch his hand movements, also take into account the thing he says. It really helps me. He mentions other art vocbaulary you may not familiar with, such as "negative space", just google it, its pretty simple

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*Lineweight, although she refers to ink mainly in this video, it also applies to pencil.

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[MasterKojito]

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I'm gonna be blunt:
-It looks like shit
I have no idea where to start, so I'll just go from top to bottom.
*The hair is way to messy, and disorganized. It's also too 'edgey' or 'sharp'
*It also shows no variation in shading whatsoever, shadings should go from dark to light, and vice versa. Shadings are not meant to "fill in white", there meant to emphasis 3D effects onto a 2D object. Your shading is also all over the place, and have no consistency in where they should be(seen on the hands, and elbows)
*The entire image looks off proportion, although I can't tell until I see your original reference, the hand on the left side, in contrast to the right hand side do not match up with the perspective given, the left hand sides elbows, going up towards the hand, slims too much.
*There is no line weight, it's took me at least a minute or two to recognize where the neck, breast, elbows, arm, hair, etc separate.
*The abdomen is too strongly defined(unless she actually has Ab's like that)
*The legs have a weird perspective, the shading on the right hand side thigh, makes it appear at a strange angle, suggesting that they should at least show some of her feet, if not legs continuing from the other side.


Advice:
*Try reading these shading techniques/tips. If this is too complex to understand, Google: Shading Techniques. There should be at least 4 mentioned. Smudge/Scumble, Hatching, Cross Hatching and Stippling. [spoiler]
*I always refer to this video before tackling on drawing hair, just watch his hand movements, also take into account the thing he says. It really helps me. He mentions other art vocbaulary you may not familiar with, such as "negative space", just google it, its pretty simple
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*Lineweight, although she refers to ink mainly in this video, it also applies to pencil.
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Awesome post

[Vaya]

if this is a drawing from mind , you're awesome
but if you used reference , you need more patience and practice

[CrimsonNuker]

if this is a drawing from mind , you're awesome
but if you used reference , you need more patience and practice

More like, if he used reference, the reference needs to be provided

[LaloHao]

It's a draw from reference.

About the leg being amputee , the reference is like that too lol
I guess i did hurry the draw, i blame maryjane, the effect only lasted 8 hours

Also seriously wtf, do i need to draw nude to get attention? I'm gonna start doing that

Thanks a lot for the advice, i want to keep improving, that's gonna help on my next drawing

if this is a drawing from mind , you're awesome
but if you used reference , you need more patience and practice

More like, if he used reference, the reference needs to be provided

i found her on 4ch

[Heosphoros]

Yeah, sorry about the harsh criticism. When I get back into the mood of drawing(which I have not done in a long time, been painting mainly) I'll let you nuke away at it :]

[LaloHao]

It's ok, that's what i need actually, i don't need everyone telling me how it's good, i need someone to tell me what's bad because sometimes i don't notice, i get too focused on a part and forget about everything else

[Miguez]

If you just removed the abs it would look way better.

I'd be interested in seing the original, just to compare them. Maybe you could PM it to me, somehow?

[cpinney]

my question is, why did you put the abs in, the original doesn't have abs

[0l3n]

my question is, why did you put the abs in, the original doesn't have abs

Post the original yes?

[LaloHao]

my question is, why did you put the abs in, the original doesn't have abs

because i can