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So i'm in photography class and me being new to this kind of art same with photoshop i was wondering what could make this image better looking cause my teacher told me today that it looks somewhat boring. this is my photo
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Im guessing your allowed to use photoshop right?


If so, you could try to do something along the lines of:

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well the plastic bag on the left takes too much atention! and it shows nothing! thats why ur teacher says its boring!

and ol3n has a nice idea! u can play with it that way!
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that looks really cool could you tell me what you did there? im new to photoshop... :oops:
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Well, first thing I did was to slap on a B&W gradient map because, well, the colors were a bit dull and bland.

Sharpened/blurred.

After that, some extensive use of the burn/dodge tools and I used a brightness/contrast layer.

Lastly I added the red color and set it to... god, cant remember what I set it to, nevermind just experiment, and I added some black and white brushing on the sides with a large soft brush.

Not really detailed but its the best I can do at 2am.
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0l3n wrote:Well, first thing I did was to slap on a B&W gradient map because, well, the colors were a bit dull and bland.

Sharpened/blurred.

After that, some extensive use of the burn/dodge tools and I used a brightness/contrast layer.

Lastly I added the red color and set it to... god, cant remember what I set it to, nevermind just experiment, and I added some black and white brushing on the sides with a large soft brush.

Not really detailed but its the best I can do at 2am.


alright sounds cool i'll play around with the stuff you just told me when i go back to school monday
i'll post a final picture soon by tuesday or thursday
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