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NSR~On the move

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I'd especially like to know what you think about the text. I personally think I some how made it look good at last.

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But yeah, CnC please.
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Looks really nice.
It would be better if you could add some more detail to the bigger ones.
Also, sharpen her a bit.

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Work on lighting, it looks forced. ;d
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Bump :cry:
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New version added. Sharpened it a bit.
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Seriously someone :cry:
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Render needs a lot of work. First of all, she's wearing clothes, wtf? That just doesn't work for this type of sig. Second, she's not attractive, again, not gonna work for this style. Third, your focal point. The render is supposed to be the focal, but the render is ugly/not naked and I'm forced to look away and I find that there is no focal, fix that--make a focal.


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SM-Count wrote:Render needs a lot of work. First of all, she's wearing clothes, wtf? That just doesn't work for this type of sig. Second, she's not attractive, again, not gonna work for this style. Third, your focal point. The render is supposed to be the focal, but the render is ugly/not naked and I'm forced to look away and I find that there is no focal, fix that--make a focal.


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SM-Count wrote:Render needs a lot of work. First of all, she's wearing clothes, wtf? That just doesn't work for this type of sig. Second, she's not attractive, again, not gonna work for this style. Third, your focal point. The render is supposed to be the focal, but the render is ugly/not naked and I'm forced to look away and I find that there is no focal, fix that--make a focal.


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SM-Count wrote:Render needs a lot of work. First of all, she's wearing clothes, wtf? That just doesn't work for this type of sig. Second, she's not attractive, again, not gonna work for this style. Third, your focal point. The render is supposed to be the focal, but the render is ugly/not naked and I'm forced to look away and I find that there is no focal, fix that--make a focal.


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