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So what you think? I think I should make effects even more "massive" so they would cover more of the bg. But I've worked with this enough for today.
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DumboDii wrote:Image

So what you think? I think I should make effects even more "massive" so they would cover more of the bg. But I've worked with this enough for today.


Do this and post back..it could change the sig completely! Right now the tag is good but it's missing that wow factor.

Also, I know I'm awesome like and everyone wants to be like me 8) but I think you're better off without the drips they seem a little false and low quality. Or at the very least re-work them into a more realistic fashion.

BTW, Good choice of render, this is probably the first time I can say this about one of the AC newbies. Flawless composition with it--I don't think this could have been done with any other render. Just goes to prove how true what rek the rest of us have been trying to pound into you guys....the stock/render choice makes or breaks a tag.

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DumboDii wrote:Image

So what you think? I think I should make effects even more "massive" so they would cover more of the bg. But I've worked with this enough for today.


Do this and post back..it could change the sig completely! Right now the tag is good but it's missing that wow factor.

Also, I know I'm awesome like and everyone wants to be like me 8) but I think you're better off without the drips they seem a little false and low quality. Or at the very least re-work them into a more realistic fashion.

BTW, Good choice of render, this is probably the first time I can say this about one of the AC newbies. Flawless composition with it--I don't think this could have been done with any other render. Just goes to prove how true what rek the rest of us have been trying to pound into you guys....the stock/render choice makes or breaks a tag.


Thanks for comments. I will work with it again day after tomorrow. Have to study for my English exam tomorrow.

And yea those drops were inspired by you :P They can be really cool when made well.
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Love the style.

It's teh sexyness. :love:

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I'd kill the blur. Blur doesn't go that well with vectory kind of effects imo. Keep it up.
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i agree with hostage on the drips and melez on the blur.

i think if you can keep this one clean and sleak, it will
really turn out great.

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Thanks. I'm working on it.
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New versions added!

I think I will work with it even more. Just out of inspiration for now.
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i really like it, even tho i'm usually not that
fond of small sigs. the only suggestion i have
left really is to get some more depth on the left
side. it's a bit flat there while depth is great
around the focal.

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Looks awesome Dumbo! I know you're going for depth with the blurred lines/effects on the right side, but I think it could be a touch less blurred and still give you good depth. Fantastic colors though, and I love the clouds and that cute little bird.

OFT: Do you know if she's related to the Dechanel chick who plays in Bones? Zooey is much prettier imo, but they're both beautiful.
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lavapockets wrote:Looks awesome Dumbo! I know you're going for depth with the blurred lines/effects on the right side, but I think it could be a touch less blurred and still give you good depth. Fantastic colors though, and I love the clouds and that cute little bird.

OFT: Do you know if she's related to the Dechanel chick who plays in Bones? Zooey is much prettier imo, but they're both beautiful.


Thanks for comment.

And I dunno. I know that Zooey got sister but dunno anything about her.
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I don't like that bird. >.<
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