wip - Don't know how to finish this one. Suggestion would be great!
NSR+WIP
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MasterKojito
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The colors on the first one
Re: NSR+WIP
hmm, i like the first one a lot.
the second one, the light on the right top corner are hurting my eyes. or is it just me?
the second one, the light on the right top corner are hurting my eyes. or is it just me?
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Re: NSR+WIP
1st;
Very nice colours and all, but right now, its looking kinda chaotic, cuz of that, flow is lacking. Also, even though its an abstract, try to setup a focal.
2nd;
Its way too bright. Also, all the random effects and such are drowning out any chance for a strong flow and focal.
Overall, work on composition.
Very nice colours and all, but right now, its looking kinda chaotic, cuz of that, flow is lacking. Also, even though its an abstract, try to setup a focal.
2nd;
Its way too bright. Also, all the random effects and such are drowning out any chance for a strong flow and focal.
Overall, work on composition.
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Re: NSR+WIP
I absolutely adore the second one. No real opinion on the first, but the second one is sick.
I guess you could darken it, but it's such so frikin' sick I don't even care ^ ^
Awesome focal, hesh flow.
I guess you could darken it, but it's such so frikin' sick I don't even care ^ ^
Awesome focal, hesh flow.
