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nsr ~ Dim Light

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Tried to do a tag with textures, paying attention to lighting and depth.
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I like it but somehow my eyes are getting drawed to the right side o_o Maybe try cutting down a bit more of the right and concentrate on pointing out the vocal a bit more. Just my opnion. 7,5/10 anyways
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YangKang wrote:somehow my eyes are getting drawed to the right side

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Minor changes like the right side darkened a bit, sharpen, etc.

Without the little green on the right side at all, the whole tag looks too empty.
Thanks for the comments.
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I like it :o IMO one of the best from you :)

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HejsaN wrote:I like it :o IMO one of the best from you :)

+1, but whats the text in the background?
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It says "Melez", lol. I'm not good at writing at some angle.
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I like this one alot. I can't find it now...but that pentool one you had was my favorite of yours so far. It was really cool...and it really inspired me to want to mess with the pen tool. You have a good eye, I just wish you would take your time with your work more often and really apply yourself :) It's fun to see what you make then.

I gotta say this cuz I've wanted to for a while, and then I'll be done: You're always posting how you rushed things and how you're not entirely happy with them. It's a bit annoying to be asked to critique something when you didn't put your effort into, and it also shows in your work when you don't. Keep working hard! It's much better all around :D
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Its a bit empty to the right
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@Lava: I'm very glad, for the first part.
But for the second, well.... I say it only when I know made some mistakes, or when I look at the piece and say "Damn, this looks like poop". So sometimes, it's not like I didn't put effort to it, it's just that I cant see where I made a mistake clearly.
And I didn't say that for some time now. ;p
Thanks for the comments everyone.
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