probably best one yet

[Melez]

99% pentool.

Spoiler!

^The first sketch ^^

C'n'C please.

EDIT: I know there are many mistakes, but it's done with a mouse. And I rushed up a bit.

[Hostage]

It's actually not half bad. You just need to work on your;

Colour
Perspective
Composition

Other then those three key points I'd also watch how you add your depth and how much you use outerglow. Other then that good job.

P.S you fu.cked up the stroke on your "N"

[Melez]

Appreciated. I'll hook up another version, minor changes.