English corseworkk

[DistortedMind]

Got some corsework today and i need to plan a short story
any one got any ideas of what i can do me short story on
this would help if you put it like

1 story starts (intro)
2
3
4
5 story ends (ending)

thanks for your time =]

[Snoopy]

I had a similar task, except I had to base mine on a poem. Basically I failed with a D10 (D+) so I won't bother trying to help you .
I knew I was uncreative though.

[DistortedMind]

I had a similar task, except I had to base mine on a poem. Basically I failed with a D10 (D+) so I won't bother trying to help you .
I knew I was uncreative though.

yeah it sucks seriosly i had some corsework last week and i didnt hand it in and my teacher was pissed LOL

[Snoopy]

I had a similar task, except I had to base mine on a poem. Basically I failed with a D10 (D+) so I won't bother trying to help you .
I knew I was uncreative though.

yeah it sucks seriosly i had some corsework last week and i didnt hand it in and my teacher was pissed LOL

Yeah. If we don't hand a draft in, we basically get a fail, and I was away with a cold in the middle of summer so I took a week off school. Then because I didn't have a doctors certificate I couldn't apply for an extension ;l sucks.

[DistortedMind]

I had a similar task, except I had to base mine on a poem. Basically I failed with a D10 (D+) so I won't bother trying to help you .
I knew I was uncreative though.

yeah it sucks seriosly i had some corsework last week and i didnt hand it in and my teacher was pissed LOL

Yeah. If we don't hand a draft in, we basically get a fail, and I was away with a cold in the middle of summer so I took a week off school. Then because I didn't have a doctors certificate I couldn't apply for an extension ;l sucks.

AWW thats pretty unlucky
i just need some ideas on what to base my story on :>

[Snoopy]

You could base it on something that happened to you, your friend, someone in your family etc.

You could even read a book and base it on something similar to that, just with a twist at the end.

[DistortedMind]

you know what my teacher said the same

[Snoopy]

Yes. Well what I would do is fill out a plan type thing.

I.E.
Paragraph 1: <Insert what's going to happen here>
until you get to Paragraph 5/6 which would usually in a short story be your twist.


We're also told to put lots of C3 comments (Criteria 3 Comments - Comments relating to how society perceives someone or something). I.E. Society rejects/challenges/reinforces someone or something.

It's hard to explain.

[takolin]

I had a similar task, except I had to base mine on a poem. Basically I failed with a D10 (D+) so I won't bother trying to help you .
I knew I was uncreative though.

yeah it sucks seriosly i had some corsework last week and i didnt hand it in and my teacher was pissed LOL

Yeah. If we don't hand a draft in, we basically get a fail, and I was away with a cold in the middle of summer so I took a week off school. Then because I didn't have a doctors certificate I couldn't apply for an extension ;l sucks.

You take a week of for a cold?

That's sad.

[Snoopy]

yeah it sucks seriosly i had some corsework last week and i didnt hand it in and my teacher was pissed LOL

Yeah. If we don't hand a draft in, we basically get a fail, and I was away with a cold in the middle of summer so I took a week off school. Then because I didn't have a doctors certificate I couldn't apply for an extension ;l sucks.

You take a week of for a cold?

That's sad.

Yeah. I did. Sure it's sad. I don't care.

[satman83]

1 story starts (intro)
2man walks down street
3man pushes someone to the floor looks like he is attacking them
4man is then shown to have saved the persons life from falling building work
5 story ends (ending)

[Breed]

My friend wrote about a time he got alcohol poisoning.
Wne tlike this:

1. Sets up scene
2.Explains finishing boring night
3. Explains reasoning for drink a bottle of vodka in one go by representing his mind and options with a magical dragon and wizard.
4. Repurcussions of consumption
5. Hospital

[CrimsonNuker]

Your life story on the internet.

[DistortedMind]

Your life story on the internet.

if i done that it would be POOOP

[satman83]

Your life story on the internet.

if i done that it would be POOOP

True...but your teachers would love it

[ThatBluePerson]

What is a "corseworkk"?

[MrJoey]

What in the fuck... Has OTL become study hall, or has everyone just gotten more retarded? Numerous threads about homework, essays, math, etc... If you're a student, look in your damn textbook, and figure out the answer yourself, if you can't, you're taking the wrong classes.

[DistortedMind]

errr STFU i just wanted some ideas thats wll jeesh man

[IceCrash]

seriously joey, chill lol
isn't off topic lounge to just chill and talk about wtf u wanna talk about?
socialize a little? >.<''
just relax

[Squirt]

Got some corsework today and i need to plan a short story
any one got any ideas of what i can do me short story on
this would help if you put it like

1 story starts (intro)
Man plans to go back in time and stop himelf from being born

2
Details
3
More detail of his plan
4
Meets a young woman ends up getting her prego
5 story ends (ending)
He is the father of the man who created the time machine.

thanks for your time =]

Understand where I'm going with this?

[DistortedMind]

Got some corsework today and i need to plan a short story
any one got any ideas of what i can do me short story on
this would help if you put it like

1 story starts (intro)
Man plans to go back in time and stop himelf from being born

2
Details
3
More detail of his plan
4
Meets a young woman ends up getting her prego
5 story ends (ending)
He is the father of the man who created the time machine.

thanks for your time =]

Understand where I'm going with this?

Thats Good dude i might take that into thought

[Squirt]

No problem =)