Funktion tryout-track

[klokus]

Hai

I'm DJ and Producer...
I would like to hear some comments on my first "track" (let's call it tryout).
It is on "Funktion"'s Myspace...
http://www.myspace.com/funktionbe
(Please note: I didn't put much info yet on this myspace-page)

Also a little question:
How can I change the layout of my myspace-thing? It acts weird :S

[CrimsonNuker]

Pretty nice. What do you use to make your music?

[klokus]

Fruity Loops, but I use Nexus as vst

[CrimsonNuker]

Nice. I have both of those, but ever time I try, I just cant make a good beat/song

[klokus]

What musicstyle do you make?

[CrimsonNuker]

Trance

[klokus]

That's a bit harder to make than average electrohouse

You should start with a good rythm (kicks, snares, clapes, eventually some extra stuff).
Then try to write a bassline. Try playing, don't try writing When you have something good, build it up in your "Piano Roll".
Then make lead.
Then build up your track.
FX...

*Edit: don't make your bassline to complicated. You can do alot with just the same note and difference in rythm.

[Midori]

something's missing.

[klokus]

something's missing.

Yep, but I can't find out what...