NSR, Yoko Ritona ~ +New sig

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NSR, Yoko Ritona ~ +New sig

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First time i post here, so i wanted to start out with a nsr ^^

Constructive criticism would be nice :3


Here it is:
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Here is the new sig i made:
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Last edited by Miawz on Wed Mar 11, 2009 12:08 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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Miawz wrote:First time i post here, so i wanted to start out with a nsr ^^

Constructive criticism would be nice :3


Here it is:
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I like it Miawz.
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Snoopy wrote:
Miawz wrote:First time i post here, so i wanted to start out with a nsr ^^

Constructive criticism would be nice :3


Here it is:
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I like it Miawz.



Thx, i tryed to keep it clean, so it will give a better futuristic look, instead of overfill it with random brushes...
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It looks pretty good but try to keep the focal point from the edges. So try to move the girl a little more to the left.

Other than that its great.
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Update: New sig, please rate n give critics!

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That new one is great, just add a little bit of lighting at the top.
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0l3n wrote:That new one is great, just add a little bit of lighting at the top.


I agree.
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lol your here now? >.>
that took long

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magisuns wrote:lol your here now? >.>
that took long

Screw u, ure just my imagination D:
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0l3n wrote:That new one is great, just add a little bit of lighting at the top.

Something like this?

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