NSR- Painted Truly

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NSR- Painted Truly

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i think the sig is able to express itself, wich is good
i think the flow's messed up tho, there could be many reasons for this
the repetitive left side, and the fact that the head is big.. alsou basicly have no bg in the right part, i mean that could be alright but in this case it makes it plain and u dont know what to focus ur eyes on as well- The text, you could of had chosen complementar colours.. idk
I think you get what i mean, i like the head tho, gj :p
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The focal is really big.. Try not to have a face, alone as a focal. It looks nice, but I don't know, maybe lower the contrast. I don't know really.
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Its good...but looks like an accident in a paint shop :P

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I dont like text that follows lines. Try to it them horizontal.
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rek wrote:I dont like text that follows lines. Try to it them horizontal.


Exactly. Ignore everything else, expecially the contrast, which makes the sig, lower the contrast and it's junk. The lines and the text look horrid, those are your problem.
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"ignore everything else" lol
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IceCrash wrote:"ignore everything else" lol

He's not wrong.

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IceCrash wrote:"ignore everything else" lol


And i'm not even lying.
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