However i made this, i found it cute.
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Verfo
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the background is awesome imo, but the render is too small, make it bigger and dont show the whole render just the top part, 8/10, keep up the good work.
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Hostage
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Verfo wrote:the background is awesome imo, but the render is too small, make it bigger and dont show the whole render just the top part, 8/10, keep up the good work.
I would avoid that if I were you it looks fine the way it is, maybe just work on the text a little and blend her in a bit, other then that fantastic work.
My reason being to not change the render is because of the direction she is facing, if you scaled her up and her back is turned to the audience, it would look odd. Besides with her at this size the c4d is working to add great flow. KIU ^^
PS, second glance. Nice lighting.
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MasterKojito
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. Great work, 7/10 
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cin
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i like it a lot amelie.
only 2 things; i think it would be better if some of the
"smoke", or whatever i can call your background effects,
would go in front of the render. this might add up to the
depth of the sig.
second is that i like the text already, but i think it
could look even better if you would have less space in
the vertical direction. so basically putting "pure off-
ering" and "Rosseau" closer to eachother.
other than that, great job ame
only 2 things; i think it would be better if some of the
"smoke", or whatever i can call your background effects,
would go in front of the render. this might add up to the
depth of the sig.
second is that i like the text already, but i think it
could look even better if you would have less space in
the vertical direction. so basically putting "pure off-
ering" and "Rosseau" closer to eachother.
other than that, great job ame
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IceCrash
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Re: Was Bored
cin wrote:i like it a lot amelie.
only 2 things; i think it would be better if some of the
"smoke", or whatever i can call your background effects,
would go in front of the render. this might add up to the
depth of the sig.
second is that i like the text already, but i think it
could look even better if you would have less space in
the vertical direction. so basically putting "pure off-
ering" and "Rosseau" closer to eachother.
other than that, great job ame
agreed
really like the sig amelie KIU
