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V2

Only thing I don't like is the background... Somehow doesn't fit with the character. Still, simple and nice.

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i think v3 (the text between v1 and v2) :)
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imo, its too plain
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:love: :love: :love: that render....but it def needs a little something more. BTW, did you get that one from planet renders? I was looking for EP renders the other day and I saw they have a pino one, but I didn't see this one :(
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it was on planet renders.

I tried fixing the space problem, ended up with a blur problem >_>
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Barotix wrote:it was on planet renders.

I tried fixing the space problem, ended up with a blur problem >_>
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V1 now, better. Still don't like the color of the background, though.

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I'm sorry but it ruined an awesome anime series.

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V1 in the second set look good
but still very plain background need to be fixes and u need A font that suit the render
maybe bleeding cowboys font :)
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Dang, well I didn't see it :D I'll have to look again.

Anywho, try to add a bit of color, a color filter, some gradients, maybe a c4d or two, something to make her stand out from the background. Something like the blue color of the eyeshadow she wears would be kick ass.
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lavapockets wrote:Dang, well I didn't see it :D I'll have to look again.

Anywho, try to add a bit of color, a color filter, some gradients, maybe a c4d or two, something to make her stand out from the background. Something like the blue color of the eyeshadow she wears would be kick ass.


So that's what I was missing. The render wasn't "popping."
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Barotix wrote:So that's what I was missing. The render wasn't "popping."


Yea..it was kind of blending into your background. More depth -.- but that's and issue I have too. I would make suggestions but I'm still working on that hehehehe
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