NSR ~ Sing for the Moment

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NSR ~ Sing for the Moment

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Dont like it.. w/e

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Hmmm, it's nice but , and you probably already know this, the text can use a little tweaking. My advice; either get rid of "poetry" or make" sing for the moment a smaller font. Also move it to the left side closer to his hand your right side seems bit heavy. This way it will balance it out. I really like the background but something about the colours looks odd to me. All in all awesome job. ^^
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Flow and depth need a lot of work, Scratch the text. I like the concept, just clean it up.
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