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_UnKnOwN
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NSR~ BloodCry Blahblahhhhh....

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made it today - what do you think? outa 10?

constructive crit pleasee :roll:

thanks before hand :love:
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6.5/10

-light source is wierd
-seems crammed
-and corner text
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Post by fena »

In contrast to Panu, I actually like the text in the corner - it looks pretty nice. Another thing that I like about your Sig is the border: it looks nice and fresh, compared to the normal 1px stroke border.
However, I think that the size of your Sig is a tad too small. I've always liked 320px by 110 px. Even if what I like as my size is only a personal opinion, like Panu said, for this Sig, it makes the render seem very cramped. Other than that, although it's not really in my style, I like it. It looks like you really did a nice job.

7.5/10 from me, dear. :]

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Ill agree on what fena said except for one thing, the text. Id say if you want to have corner text it should be small, about 9-12px. Thats just my opinion though, you can do whatever you want.
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Thanks for all the feedback guys :)
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Different font, and placement. I agree the light source is at a weird spot, it was the first thing that drew my attention and when you add that much light it creates the focal point, and I don't think the focal point is really the shoulder. Other then that it's aight <3
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