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Quick and easy one, but it's been a while, i like em clean :p

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been a long time since i had time to play around with photoshop so i thought i'd have some fun with the most basic tools and went smudging a bit :p
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Looks great, but those //// Look kinda odd there.
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it's to give da flow nabcake :P
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I know but it looks odd :[
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noes :p

it's to make the flow have a V shape :p

edit, changed the direction of the scanlines so it would go with the flow of the sig, looks better :p
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Its very flat :/
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i think its great honestly lol
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yeh i thought so too,

it's so simple it looks nice imo :D, kinda surprised me when i saw the outcome. Random smudging ftw!
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It's really boring, sorry.

Try moving the box of diagonal lines closer and under the text and change the colour to add a bit more colour to the whole piece. Speaking of text try finding another font the current one is just adding to the "blandness" of the tag. Now that I got my cons aside I do love the smudging looks like an extension of the wave BG on the phone. Real water colour like.

Other then that nice work definitely one of the higher skilled tags I've seen lately in the AC. Hope to see a lot more from you. :)

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cheers :)

might be making some more if i get some more free time inbetweens chool and going out for drinks :D

i'll go check around for some better fonts :p
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Looks more like a work in progess.
That white background needs to go imo. It should be covered by the smudge that surrounds the phone so it doesn't look so plain.
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You should put a background, other than that, I like it.
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nah if i'd smudge trhe entire background, or put something in it the abstract effect would be lost, i might put in some extra things but i won't fill the background :)
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RogueKiller wrote:Looks more like a work in progess.
That white background needs to go imo. It should be covered by the smudge that surrounds the phone so it doesn't look so plain.


Agreed.
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binnosh wrote:nah if i'd smudge trhe entire background, or put something in it the abstract effect would be lost, i might put in some extra things but i won't fill the background :)


+1 and my only comment.... :love:
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