Attempt 2

HOLLAstir · Post by **HOLLAstir** » Sun Dec 09, 2007 8:12 am

Messed around with two C4D's. Smudged and what not. Just trying to get used to everything again. Holla

Post by **Doron** » Sun Dec 09, 2007 1:09 pm

is it just me or did you made that guy pop out more?

SuicideGrl · Post by **SuicideGrl** » Sun Dec 09, 2007 3:55 pm

he pops a little too much for me, especially compared w/ your The Game sig.

however, i really like what you've done here. your text is especially tasty, i like how you have made it your own w/ the little touches.

i'm also a fan of how all your effect elements seem to be splattery and nondesticnt, rather than perfectly formed. wouldn't mind knowing what kinds of brushes you used, if any.

this one definitely is more... complete... than the other one somehow.

WaX · Post by **WaX** » Sun Dec 09, 2007 4:02 pm

Its nice and the text is nice , but somthin with the pic thats jst not lookin right for me, but it might be just me lol

fena · Post by **fena** » Sun Dec 09, 2007 4:07 pm

I love it, man. One of the nicest Sigs that I've seen around here in a while. I definitely like the color scheme - yellow and a light blue/turquoise - and the text looks awesome as well. Hollister seagull fits right into the spot where you placed it.

However, like everyone else said, your render still pops out a little bit. It's starting to look like you just slapped your render onto a background that you made beforehand, and then called it a day. Create depth, but not too much depth, that it's so blatantly obvious.
Another thing is your border. I'm not sure if I like that bright blue as a border. It's a bit too luminescent for me to put around the edge of your Sig.

Overall, it's a nice, nice Sig. 9/10 from me!

HOLLAstir · Post by **HOLLAstir** » Sun Dec 09, 2007 8:08 pm

SuicideGrl wrote:i'm also a fan of how all your effect elements seem to be splattery and nondesticnt, rather than perfectly formed. wouldn't mind knowing what kinds of brushes you used, if any.

The brushes are off deviantart. They are called Brushset002 and SpazzSplatter. There is one more but I can't remember which one it is. But thanks all for the comments, i'll work on my render looking more part of the sig rather then standing out so much <3

BrokenSaint · Post by **BrokenSaint** » Mon Dec 10, 2007 9:21 am

Your render needs to be blended in more. It's also a bit blurry.

durkadurka · Post by **durkadurka** » Mon Dec 10, 2007 7:13 pm

it looks the same to me... maybe thats cause im not as familiar with the little tricks as you all are, but i dont see a difference???

fena · Post by **fena** » Tue Dec 11, 2007 1:53 am

durkadurka wrote:it looks the same to me... maybe thats cause im not as familiar with the little tricks as you all are, but i dont see a difference???

Don't see the difference between...

(Sorry, don't quite get what you mean, hehe)

durkadurka · Post by **durkadurka** » Tue Dec 11, 2007 3:51 am

HOLLAstir wrote:Messed around with two C4D's. Smudged and what not. Just trying to get used to everything again. Holla

between this one above and his sig one... oir is that not what yall are talking about... ? o.O

HOLLAstir · Post by **HOLLAstir** » Tue Dec 11, 2007 4:25 am

There is no difference. They felt I needed to blend my render into the sig a bit more, and they are right, it could be blended better, i'm just lazy.

durkadurka · Post by **durkadurka** » Tue Dec 11, 2007 5:06 am

ah ha ... it makes sense now to me lmao... i was sitting back searching hard for any changes.. .i was begining to think you people made me feel like i was taking crazy pills lmao

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