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BrokenSaint
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My First Vector

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This is my first go at vectoring.

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Comments, Criticism, and Suggestions are welcome.

Can you please rate? X/10
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Post by Wickedz »

Hmm, looks good but up the opacity on some of the arrows behind the girl. Bit too faded. :)
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It's cool. The font fits, and the 'flow', or the direction of the arrows, is ok al well. GJ; 10/10 :) It's good as it is now :)
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7/10 the only thing bothering me is the text
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reK wrote:7/10 the only thing bothering me is the text


Why? o.O It fits. Perhaps he could fix the warp, but that's all. o.O
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Post by Rizla »

love the colors, but I think your arrows on the bottom conflict with the flow of your tag, you have arrows coming from behind her that take you into the flow of that horizontal line that arcs down, which run into these arrows pointing the wrong way >.<

And I hate text along paths, but meh.

7/10, fix the flow and I would give it an 8.5.

love the colors btw, orange/blue = fav.
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Post by CrimsonNuker »

6/10

the border is too thick for my likings.
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Snudge wrote:
reK wrote:7/10 the only thing bothering me is the text


Why? o.O It fits. Perhaps he could fix the warp, but that's all. o.O



Rizla wrote:And I hate text along paths
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Post by pherball »

:love: the text. I tried vector brushes but could never make them fit together like you did in such a small space :P
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