another hitsuagaya

Vibrator · Post by **Vibrator** » Thu Jan 03, 2008 5:33 pm

ooo i see your making a flow going bottom midle to top right but after the blue ends the flow stops.

0l3n · Post by **0l3n** » Thu Jan 03, 2008 5:39 pm

Border doesnt really apeal to me, never liked the "fade out" borders. Depth looks good to and you followed our advice and moved the render a little more to the center I see, great.

Now for the bashing (hehe just kidding), the render has a choppy outline, I dont know if you cut it out or someone else did but it needs working on. Text needs to be more blended in and not pop out so much. Lighting is kind off non existant, it should come from above to the right. Last thing is the backround, id say it needs more detail because it looks flat and boring, colours are good though and the way you made the backround "flow" slightly is good to but it needs even more flow.