New Sig: Dream

HOLLAstir · Post by **HOLLAstir** » Sun Dec 23, 2007 11:47 pm

Well since my last few sigs have been really simple I tried to do a lot more smudging distortions and c4d's and make it blend and flow. From the pen tool to clipping masks I did just about everything. C&C <3 <3

fena · Post by **fena** » Mon Dec 24, 2007 12:17 am

Love it.
I kind of see a girl underwater, surrounded by shards of ice, rising to the surface. Kind of like someone who was on the Titanic when it sunk and what happened right after she plunged into the water. The effects look fantastic, and I especially like the light source.

Two things that I'd like to point out, though.
1. Below her chin. There's a little slip of black that I'm not too fond of. It just makes her chin look unnatural, until you closely examine it.

2. The word Dream. It's just a bit too spaced out for my tastes, is all.

Looks great. Looks dreamy. Not my favorite, to be perfectly honest, but certainly among your finest.

HOLLAstir · Post by **HOLLAstir** » Mon Dec 24, 2007 12:24 am

Yeah, it looked better spread out rather then closer together. And that little black spot is her shadow on her shirt. I suppose I could have done something with it, but I just left it. Thanks for the comment though <3

Faiien · Post by **Faiien** » Mon Dec 24, 2007 1:30 am

looks great :love:

but i agree with fena that chin part is throwing off her face

HOLLAstir · Post by **HOLLAstir** » Mon Dec 24, 2007 1:35 am

Woah I just noticed what it is your talking about ha, The layer is on hard mix. Fixing it now <3

Luoma · Post by **Luoma** » Mon Dec 24, 2007 1:42 am

Amazing work again, really tired though night night =)

CrimsonNuker · Post by **CrimsonNuker** » Mon Dec 24, 2007 3:15 am

Your best 7.8/10

Faiien · Post by **Faiien** » Mon Dec 24, 2007 3:28 am

yep just work on that chin part and it will look great!
good job holla

SuicideGrl · Post by **SuicideGrl** » Mon Dec 24, 2007 3:37 am

i disagree w/ fena, i love the spacing of the text.

ok holla. you've pretty much got this style down cold. time for something new from you :)

HOLLAstir · Post by **HOLLAstir** » Mon Dec 24, 2007 3:39 am

Yeah, I've got a stock I'm going to work with soon. It will be totally different. Even though I <3 my style, i'll go out of the box for once.

HOLLAstir · Post by **HOLLAstir** » Mon Dec 24, 2007 4:48 am

Any other comments? <3 <3

christina · Post by **christina** » Mon Dec 24, 2007 8:49 am

Love it ^^
9.5/10

HOLLAstir · Post by **HOLLAstir** » Mon Dec 24, 2007 10:45 am

christina wrote:Love it ^^
9.5/10

Thanks love <3