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[Criticism] I need some comments on my video!

Posted: Fri Jul 30, 2010 11:41 pm
by apan
Hey guys, i decided to make an SRO vid just for fun :) Vegas is new to me so dont jugde me too hard okey ;D As I said, I need some tips and tricks, what can I improve? And since this is only a preview there are some minor flaws :)

Dont forget HD

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rns2BPDk7w8

I would appreciate some criticism :)

Re: [Criticism] I need some comments on my video!

Posted: Sat Jul 31, 2010 12:13 am
by Desgraciada
Nothing to say about it.. cause there's nothing in it.. only an intro.

Re: [Criticism] I need some comments on my video!

Posted: Sat Jul 31, 2010 12:40 am
by apan
Desgraciada wrote:Nothing to say about it.. cause there's nothing in it.. only an intro.

Yeah but i thought you could say saomething about the effects, audio sync, well i dont know xD Anything :P

Re: [Criticism] I need some comments on my video!

Posted: Sat Jul 31, 2010 1:40 am
by Pan_Raider(`_ยด)

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[yt]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rns2BPDk7w8[/yt]


embed pls mens

edit:
OT: not sure what to expect from this

Re: [Criticism] I need some comments on my video!

Posted: Sat Jul 31, 2010 2:58 am
by Fiction
Even tho there wasn't anything to it footage wise, I liked the feel of it. Reminded me of the movies we used to make in dEranged. I don't like how all the movies now are just pvp with lens filter and zooming in and out 20x a second...

Re: [Criticism] I need some comments on my video!

Posted: Sat Jul 31, 2010 7:11 am
by _Sir_Thalas_
good timing (vid and music), I don't like the music tho
over used that effect on the letters
why show those things from 0:20 to 0:28?
try showing some thieving/skills

Re: [Criticism] I need some comments on my video!

Posted: Sat Jul 31, 2010 10:19 am
by Jambi
i hate the music

Re: [Criticism] I need some comments on my video!

Posted: Sat Jul 31, 2010 1:06 pm
by apan
_Sir_Thalas_ wrote:good timing (vid and music), I don't like the music tho
over used that effect on the letters
why show those things from 0:20 to 0:28?
try showing some thieving/skills

First of all thanks for your comment.

Well as I said i'm new to both video editing and vegas so i dont know any good effects, so i just threw that stuff in there to try it out and yea its a little too much :)

As i said this is a preview, and this was meant to be the intro of the complete vid, and i didnt really know what i was going to film next sp i went out and shot the intro clipps and then made the intro, and when i was going to shoot some more footage I had been disconnected :@ So i didnt have anything else to show =/

Re: [Criticism] I need some comments on my video!

Posted: Sat Jul 31, 2010 1:52 pm
by Gladiator_RN
Not bad, next time try to show some more info about your video in the preview. ( not with text but with records). :)

Re: [Criticism] I need some comments on my video!

Posted: Sat Jul 31, 2010 5:35 pm
by *BlackFox
^ Yeah.. I kinda agree!

Re: [Criticism] I need some comments on my video!

Posted: Sat Jul 31, 2010 5:45 pm
by apan
Gladiator_RN wrote:Not bad, next time try to show some more info about your video in the preview. ( not with text but with records). :)

Okey, but this was acctully meant to be the intro for the complete video but i didnt have the time to make it so i just uploaded it as a preview so get some tips so i wouldnt fail on the complete video ;D

Re: [Criticism] I need some comments on my video!

Posted: Sun Aug 01, 2010 3:50 am
by _Sir_Thalas_
apan wrote:
_Sir_Thalas_ wrote:good timing (vid and music), I don't like the music tho
over used that effect on the letters
why show those things from 0:20 to 0:28?
try showing some thieving/skills

First of all thanks for your comment.

Well as I said i'm new to both video editing and vegas so i dont know any good effects, so i just threw that stuff in there to try it out and yea its a little too much :)

As i said this is a preview, and this was meant to be the intro of the complete vid, and i didnt really know what i was going to film next sp i went out and shot the intro clipps and then made the intro, and when i was going to shoot some more footage I had been disconnected :@ So i didnt have anything else to show =/

yes, I was just giving random ideas, effects are easy to find and the internet is full of tutorials (take a look). I didn't try to be mean :), but repeating effects it's kinda boring.

At the end our opinion it's not that important but how good it looks for you :wink:

Re: [Criticism] I need some comments on my video!

Posted: Sun Aug 01, 2010 9:03 am
by asusi
This belongs in Artist Corner :yay:

Re: [Criticism] I need some comments on my video!

Posted: Sun Aug 01, 2010 10:28 am
by BloodyBlade
Light rays effect ftw. :D